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2022-11-18 01:45

Lets just say I dont quite understand much of this story. It is very clear that auther actually dont know what readers like. When we come a little into the story mc gets nerfed indirectly it seems like. It is like that because everything needs to be a challenge in one way or other. It becomes annoying to say the least. Mc is also strange. He is strangely hostile against everyone. On one trip he is very hostile early day for no reason, then goes to talk with them later for company. Like what? There are also useless sidestorys everywhere which doesnt move the story in a good direction. It feels like the mc never knows anything and just follows fate blindly without thinking what is smartest for his goal. It is like he is a braindead guy. It isnt a bad stort, and I have read 400 chapters till now. It is just that I expected more when it came to storyprogressing and mc.

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