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Choka
ChokaLv32yr
2022-09-21 23:00

You gave him speed as power, but the mc didn't even put that speed to good use at all, you simply gave him speed as op power and at the same time nerfed his iq and decisions so he don't use it to get stronger faster, u as well gave mc a soft personality so he doesn't kill people and level up faster while he actually have the system that can make him stronger if go on a killing spree and the mc could have simply kept growing up in forests and killing monsters and massacring towns or things like that while avoiding those people that want his power, but you made him go into a town and make friends and start whatever he was doing. U simply gave cool things but nerfed the mc as a whole.

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SuperMaster_1o1
SuperMaster_1o1Lv3

yeah man I was thinking the same. would be cool if he pick the bow but he thinks it would only slow him down. an when he saved that girl an got exposed to a higher being.

Shadowkombat1k
Shadowkombat1kLv1

Remember that the character is only as smart as the author

IsekaiManiac
IsekaiManiacLv12

No truer words have been spoken in Web novel!

Shadowkombat1k:Remember that the character is only as smart as the author
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