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Zaracos
ZaracosLv142yr
2022-05-22 23:10

At the beginning the story was interesting, but in my opinion at around chapter 100 the story development is to slow. The main character wants to reach a new city, altough he runs with Mach 1 he needs a long time, because of too many side storys

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xxYoungMasterxx
xxYoungMasterxxLv2

He's still mach 1 after 100 chapters???

Zaracos
ZaracosLv14

unfortunately yes :(

xxYoungMasterxx:He's still mach 1 after 100 chapters???
Reckoning3000
Reckoning3000Lv13

I thought it was Mach 10

xxYoungMasterxx:He's still mach 1 after 100 chapters???
Zaracos
ZaracosLv14

yes, but he runs only at mach 1 to do more side storys XD

Reckoning3000:I thought it was Mach 10
Reckoning3000
Reckoning3000Lv13

He runs at mach 10 and the only reason he runs at mach 4+ rn is cause of the evolution to a halfbreed of the speedling race.

Zaracos:yes, but he runs only at mach 1 to do more side storys XD
Cage_Bell
Cage_BellLv3

the reason why he didn't run mach 10 when he gained Mach 10 speed Is because I would make a sonic boom

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