IsekaiManiac

Writing is too cringey to read beyond 10 chapters. The MC's personality is all over the place. I don't seem to understand if he's intelligent or stupid. Some things are not explained clearly and just taken for granted. Well I find the story pace not interesting and cringy.

Ash stick, zuzube stick and now new name again in this chapter. If there are paid chapters ahead at least put some effort in editing and translation. If we want to read almost machine translation we can also have use google translation or chatGPT.

Am I the only one facing trouble understanding what the hell is being said at the end of the chapter? What working relationship?

What does mdm and jant means?

Maybe they have uploaded everything MTL translated then are editing little by little as I found chapters upto 200-250 good enough. After that somewhere before 290 it really gets worse. All your regular mistakes like gender change, even names changes, words are repeated, sentences don't make sense. If it's only gender change or occasional name changes i can still manege but the sentences don't make sense some times. You just have to let go sometimes and on the info dump on the games it really gives too much info dump for LOL game. Before then also it was too much info dump for different game I don't remember.

Translation quality really goes down after some 200-250 chapters.

It is really exhausting to read AI written story. It does not free your mind of burden but it adds to it.

Why is there so much nonsense naration in every chapter. how is he still genin kevel after 2 chakra boost? If you don't have clear sense of power rankings of everyone and MC it'll too difficult to accept it as feasible story. Especially he got the system and original body's high talent. In another story without system he may bave become stronger just from training diligently. So here if author tries to nerf him even after system it'll be too unreasonable.

There is an issue in editing this chapter. There is some content is missing and scene jumps are not mentioned properly.

Exactly! First he was super cheap then he became wasteful when he went to 3 star hotel to eat ordering all the dishes and only eating a bite? And he was pathetic cook before, just because of system he got god tier cooking skill directly without any effort and now he looks down on others' hard won cooking skills! Super shallow and selfish MC. I also don't like the premise that the food he makes is so good that others can't eat the regular food. It's like alcohol/gambling addiction. Throwing all your money on his food and can't even eat other food; can't even eat HIS food satisfyingly as he is only serving one time. Giving him too tier skills would have sufficed, no need to give ingredients and even if the ingredients were provided it should be only top quality fresh ingredients without any capitalistic fuckery with preservative/growth/taste chemicals. That and with top cooking skills should suffice to even outdo 5 star restaurants. This is no different that drugs if they were not harmful to health other than addiction. As people who can't eat because of lack of money or because one serving is not enough for them, they will only starve! Anorexia is no joke. It's as serious as depression, even more so in my opinion!