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Achilles_Bahadur
Achilles_BahadurLv42yr
2022-02-12 16:53

Not good enough. Almost follow canon and play safe. The concept of merging HP and Marvel is good, however Author nerf MC alot. Not good enough. Almost follow canon and play safe. The concept of merging HP and Marvel is good, however Author nerf MC alot.

Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)

HelloDarkness07
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128 Chs

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B0ssu
B0ssuLv2

The fact that the author has a better grasp of English than 99% of the people who post on this site is the only good thing I can say about this story. The MC is little more than a plot device, veering between competence and idiocy as needed to suit the plot. The fusion of the HP world and the MCU world is an interesting concept, but has been handled lazily and shows that not enough thought was put into worldbuilding. All this is symptomatic of the worst and fatal flaw of this story, that the author is unwilling or unable to deviate from the stations in canon. Starting the story in the 30s, well in advance of the main plotline of both franchises, should have given plenty of opportunities to cause meaningful changes. However, the author has gone out of his way to make his MC an over-confident and moronic imbecile whenever necessary, to make sure that all the major stations of canon will still happen. And what little original content there has been is so flat that it's not worth the constant Idiot Balls to make this story a glorified canon rehash. Basically, save yourselves the time. Just re-watch the HP movies, the MCU movies, and the X-Men movies and you'll get a more competently executed and enjoyable version of this story.

3yr

CloggedMeridian
CloggedMeridianLv12

Reveal spoiler

3yr
WealthyRaccoon
WealthyRaccoonLv14

Power, be it political, magical or social, is the ability to influence a situation in favour of one's desired outcome; so despite the MCs myriad abilities he is truly powerless. The author consistently kneecaps Mason any time he has the potential to exert power and by extension be relevant, leaving us with little more than a recap of canon from a different perspective. A well written world held back by an author to concerned with holding back.

2yr
Dayside
DaysideLv12

Very mediocre and incredibly boring. It's like a take of HP fanfiction that's supposed to be 'realistic' but still 'op' and due to that it's not realistic at all. It comes out as a bit of a mess, really.

3yr
Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Egika
EgikaLv2

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Harie_Dharan
Harie_DharanLv4

i liked the previous one better. this has more details and all but in trying to make the mc not too op you made too weak even with all his powers. i mean he is a mutant, a sorcerror and a wizard who actually is physically strong but still got caught by someone and took so long to escape.

3yr
DartUpdates
DartUpdatesLv14

BACK!!!! Side note, not gonna start reading until this has atleast 15 chapters . .

3yr
DaoistfwGiBL
DaoistfwGiBLLv1

the author likes to nerf the character to create new scenes, when the character is powerful enough the author makes him lose to a random mage who isn't even strong

2yr
Stevie_nods
Stevie_nodsLv4

YESSS YOUR BACK EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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