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Harie_Dharan
Harie_DharanLv43yr
2021-09-25 20:42

i liked the previous one better. this has more details and all but in trying to make the mc not too op you made too weak even with all his powers. i mean he is a mutant, a sorcerror and a wizard who actually is physically strong but still got caught by someone and took so long to escape.

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