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VeryVyle
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Well done backstory that gives us a clear vision about the world and what to come. If there was anything to fix, maybe it's only the dialogue since the rest is actually fine. Keep up the work and good luck! [img=recommend]

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Emperor's descendant system

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I will, I wanted this to be more of a play than a novel, but I am trying to balance it to be both. Thank you for the review