Review Detail of Da_TuTuR in MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master

My rating is not my real feeling but i'm not here for unmotiving the author. I was in search for good VRMMORPG novel. I find 2 promising but not many chapter so i came here. General point of view review : - I think Writing is average at best for English people, it's okay for me because it's not my language but too many careless mistake (missing letters, inversed letters etc.). The updating frequency and stability seems good. Some good moment. Personnal point of view : I like pve oriented novel, it's more pvp (but more mixed than other well know of this type) I don't like WTF real world background : it's a level higher than "thief who..." The Character design and world background is good for the ingame part but must be better if less rushed. All this is not enough for me to drop it but... 1/ Story development is too fast, really really too fast. 2/ Author listens too much to comments No, you can't let decide the comments which spell the MC must take in the next chapter. No, you can't name an Emperor "Cervantez91" for a gift. No, you can't say "let the plot develop, i'm an author i have plan" and the next chapter you "drop" (author word) a fan service explication chapter because comments are burning... Stop thanking people or complain (for an objectif lose) or giving ultimatum (for a bonus) at each chapter. We may think you do that for the minimum number of character....... Yes, my review is a bit rough but remember my first sentence. I think the author can do better (some idea are really good/original, just need a (better) story development plan), an editor ( check the easy mistake at minimum) and we can see that the motivation is here just need a more professionnal approach. I drop for that, sorry.