Honestly, I am not really feeling this story, I feel with a lot of work and improvement you can improve greatly on your work, I would suggest you read more novels within your genre it will help you know how to get better, we all weren't perfect from the startđâ¤ď¸Keep trying
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LIKEVRW1:Okay thank you for the review but please keep reading and you might have a different opinion about the story when you go on and read more about it. So please continue and give me another review.