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2021-06-27 02:37

So far so good. While I have only read the 12 chapters that are out. The MC comes across as smart and practical. He is willing to eliminate threats to himself and his loved ones without remorse but doesn't go to the extent of being a murder hobo. Overall the stories read well with the likable and relatable MC and grammar is good enough and it does not slow the flow of reading. The only worry I have is that the MC will start having cliche villainous monologues and play with his prey too much allowing them to escape.

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