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Waka_Metalbelly
Waka_MetalbellyLv13yr
2021-07-12 23:52

Up till I stopped reading this story, it was a rushed and messy flop. Unimpressive and unorganized to a frankly silly extent. It absolutely blows my mind this unreadable mess was rated as high as it is.

Marvelous Grandmaster

HuntingFate
4.7
41 Chs

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Darwin111111
Darwin111111Lv4

I understand your point, but look at it from another point of view almost not valid. For people who have not seen SW and only know the basics, they find it interesting. This is how this works. That's why I don't find it so bad.

3yr
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sari_saarinen
sari_saarinenLv3

his personality didint change even after being jedi for years his parent dosent notice anyhting diffrent he behaves like child reveals that he is special to jean for no reason yeah no thanks mc is just stupid

3yr

Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv5

I liked it up until chapter 16, When you start introducing future versions of the MC from alternate reality's then I start heading for the door.

3yr
lstreader
lstreaderLv14

Really fantastic idea, I hope the author follows through on this story, there are a lot of stories that are dropped before they can start to show more promise. Writing quality is good and the characters background is interesting. I hope that he finds some way to get a lightsaber that would be cool. Can't wait for more!

3yr
Juantiano
JuantianoLv4

This is GOLD. First time reading SW related FF and it is great. Good luck and hope more chapters to come Author.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

3yr
Laylin13
Laylin13Lv10

So far so good. While I have only read the 12 chapters that are out. The MC comes across as smart and practical. He is willing to eliminate threats to himself and his loved ones without remorse but doesn't go to the extent of being a murder hobo. Overall the stories read well with the likable and relatable MC and grammar is good enough and it does not slow the flow of reading. The only worry I have is that the MC will start having cliche villainous monologues and play with his prey too much allowing them to escape.

3yr
Rey_G
Rey_GLv1

So far I'm going to give 3 stars. The main character does not give the impression of a wise master that has lived decades in the battlefield. He is more in line with what would happen if you gave a superpowers to a teenager, and this decreases the immersion.

3yr
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Waste of time reading this trash. MC is a simp, a complete idiot, childish even after living in the Star Wars universe, awful idea for another version of the MC, and worst of all is that other people can have the Force so the MC isnt unique at all lol this is such a garbage story and a massive waste of time. This fic would be rated so much lower if the random accounts didnt spam 5/5 reviews lol awful story dont waste your time reading this trash

3yr
mikedanger
mikedangerLv5

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

3yr
OloEyktan
OloEyktanLv4

Reveal spoiler

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