A very interesting read indeed, I found it to be a new concept in a System Genre, haven't read a novel like this still now. well-written characters and excellent story development. Way to go author. And one more thing. *Blooop!!!!* This is good.

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Read up to chapter 16. The story is allright, nothing really stands out to me compared to similar stories. Would be a decent read for me to pass some time if it wasn't for the censoring of swear words. The near constant "*Bleep*" "*Bloop*" is jarring to read and immersion breaking. Have swearing in your story or don't, I don't care either way. If you choose to do so however, then just go all the way without the ridiculous censoring.

This novel does not deliver what it promises. I was really excited at the prospect of multiple world line transmigration. But instead we got the regular old system that gives rewards for every unique monster killed. What was the point of meeting mage mc when all he get’s from him is 2 moves that in less then 10 chapters become mediocre. I was expecting his powers to develop through interacting with his other selves but now it’s just another system novel. I reas 75 chapters in total and there was no change to this so Im dropping it here.

So... like, the story basically fails it's starting premise. Ht idea of drawing upon different selves is a cool one, but that basically only happens once, with a single other self. After that, all his abilities come from doing the megaman, and they just feel... flavorless. Like, It could be spells, or chi, or psychic powers, or whatever... it wouldn't make a difference, because the powers don't feel like anything. They don't have any character. He could have a generic system, and it wouldn't make a bit of difference. World build is... something? The world doesn't actually make a lot of sense, it basically exists enough to make the main character look cool. The mist monsters occasionally talk about being chosen to replace man, but that element hasn't gone anywhere and has no payout. In the end, there was the beginning of an interesting idea here, but nothing was done with it, and it's left the story now really feeling like anything in particular.

grammar is awful, punctuations are lacking, spelling errors are as abundant as a field of flowers. some cringy moments .

Lackluster. The chapters are monotonous, there are more dialogues and system prompts than actual storytelling. The worldbuilding is confusing. The author does not have a satisfying vocabulary, he keeps saying "the fog makes the world gloomy" every two chapters or so. Not worthy a read.

hey, did you notice that? what? ah, little thing you see - when i read this novel i didnt see any plot. maybe it was lost between that timeskips? who knows.

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