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review uptill chapter 13 I think the mcs growth rate should be properly controlled...he already has a instant mastery per 4 months so during the cooldown period he should dive deep into the theoretical aspect of chakra and physical development...i know that having a 100% chakra control can feel like a monstrous genius but the naruto power system is more than just chakra manipulation....ninja factors like analyzing opponents,environments, traps etc which make up an experienced ninja, takes a lot of time to develop....and as mc doesnt have any natural talent like doujutsu , etc so he should dive deep into the research aspect of chakra like orochimaru...but with ethics.... and he should make more friends.....genuine friends not love interests...he is like 12, people at that age usually age teenage emotions...so for the mc at that stage just avoid that.....one plus point upto now is that hiruzen favors him...so he should be proactive about jutsu/chakra research and learn as much as possible without becoming overpowered for his age....because the ninja worlds is very very unfavorable to geniuses, who needs to take adult responsibilites....as he is a modern person try to remain average for now and slowly improve his talent over time gradually so that it feels natural and no crack heads like danzo or obito give him much attention at that time....he need to wait attest naruto grows up because in the naruto world being strong doesnt matter...it's only safe when the whole group grown stronger together and look after each others back and try to avoid using foul language for the good characters...the konoha shinobies especially mcs generation brats were good natured generally...so for now these are my suggestions..lets see how it goes

why not the 2 tails jinchuriki? Yugito Nii?

I dont think at that time any of the naruto characters used cuss words...mind you that the whole generation was like 11-13 years old

Bro there's a limit to how dense anyone can be but i saw you making a new level today

LOL

because the most other mythologies beyond Hinduism are racist & xenophobic af....irrespective of the number of gods the have in their faith...only hinduism teaches true secularism in our scriptures even though there are also supreme gods in our religion

has huge potential....for now(less than 10 chapters). will give a proper review once more chapters come along!!!!

bro even ninja children at 3 doesnt know those words as contribution ,etc at that age...i get that you are trying to make this hilarious but dont overdo it