Review Detail of val_the_mysterious in Ghost Busters

I'm five chapters in and am enjoying the story so far. I wouldn't mind a little more information on what the team is/does up to this point we only have the team name to go by and that just brings the movies, by the same name, to mind. There are some gaps in world-building. The best by far is the first chapter and the funeral, beautiful imagery. Characters are interesting and slowly coming together. The interactions with the team members really bring out each individual. The writing could use an edit, some spots are rougher than other's, but the author made it clear that English isn't their first language. Because of this, I say that you're doing a great job with the writing. Keep up the good work.