well let's see here. Writing quality: I will like to say am pretty decent for someone that is typing on a phone. Story development: Right now I think it's going in a slow/normal pace from what the readers are saying. World background: it's dragonball with a bit of au here and there. Updating stability: well am about to start getting busy irl but if time allows, I can post at least three to five chapters a week, oh and I won't be posting on weekends but expect them on weekdays. A more detailed explanation of the mc and how stuff came to be: mc is a normal with an abnormal mind that lets him understand/ learn stuff at a rapid pace, after some stuff he answers some questions on a questionare that appeared on his PC not knowing that it was going to come true after dieing in his sleep and appearing in the dragonball world. Read the book if you wanna know the "stupid wishes" made my the mc :/ Btw who is everybody's fav dragonball character and waifu.
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Bit of advice author to author I'd move the stuff about roblox out of the novel summary and possibly put it either in your review or a comment on your review. the game currently has a love it or hate it and look down on it kind of reputation, things that might drive away half your potential audience are generally not good to have in the summary. up to you though, I use mine as more of a filter, you can get rid of folks who wont like your novel and constantly complain based on the warnings in your tags or summary 😉. (an example would be Dumbledore bashing, if you happened to hate on him a bit in a harry potter fic you could stop complaining dumble fans in advance by telling people you have that in the novel thereby removing the audience) currently in yours people who have a somewhat negative opinion of roblox even if it's nowhere in your novel will probably not read it since that's in the summary. anyways that's more than enough ranting I'll get to reading your novel now hopeing for great things.
hmm as for my fav charachter in dbz it's gotta be piccolo post the appearance in the world tournament. I particularly liked his character in dbz abridged.
favorite waifu is probably pan with bulma being a close second but only pre vegeta relationship.
it's particularly important i find to warn people in advance about cultivator stuff since it's literally the most devisive thing on the webnovel fanfics atm.
