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Sunil334Lv13yr
2021-07-25 02:52

Landing a review after reading chapter 92. Looos like i was right to endure the beginning. The author did say the beginning was going to be trash, so i took his word and clutched through them. But when it did get around the middle it started being interesting, the beginning was hella interesting as well but the execution lacked. Butal as the story went on, it started increasing and increasing and right now i was on the edge of my seat as i read you latest 5 chapters. How the well did you start writing like that?? Like seriously the writing is vwry good when i read the latest chapter. I won't be like others and give you a chance. Please update the beginning with the same level of writing you are writing now and show them what you can do. This really has potential to be one of the best. I believe in you writer. Hope you find your rhythm and good luck for the exams. Dont putntoo much pressure on yourself because of these idiots not able to go through the entire book, they'll return once you actually start editing.. You can start doing that in your free time or when your exams are over. We do want our writer to pass after all😂😂😂. Whatever Loved your book and am waiting for more.

The Cheat Seed

Sinadin
4.5
143 Chs

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SinadinLv3

Thank you! For understanding. Well at least my pleas got through you!!. Thank you for the compliments and such long review!!. Thank you!!

3yr
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ahmed_tanimLv2

I got it. But is not it unreasonable to ask for people to keep patience when we need to pay. of course people will spend after finding something interesting. why would people spend coins on something that doesn't interest them??

3yr
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SinadinLv3

Absolutely. You are right!!. Don't pay for what you don't find interesting!!.

ahmed_tanim:I got it. But is not it unreasonable to ask for people to keep patience when we need to pay. of course people will spend after finding something interesting. why would people spend coins on something that doesn't interest them??
3yr
Sunil334Lv1

Yes It is not. I liked it so i speny it onit

ahmed_tanim:I got it. But is not it unreasonable to ask for people to keep patience when we need to pay. of course people will spend after finding something interesting. why would people spend coins on something that doesn't interest them??
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SinadinLv3

The Author Here. Currently writing this review to deliver news to you guys. I started this work 5 months ago and had dropped it on the second day itself. and then picked it up 3 months ago. My grammar and English were so childish and cringe back then and I believe I have improved a lot recently because of coming in contact with other fabulous writers. The work is undergoing editing. I have been editing my chapters from the beginning itself one by one. People who read the prologue or people who have already survived (😂) through the beginning chaps might find a lot of changes in the starting chapters. Because I have edited it all out. Talking about the editing, I am currently only editing for spelling mistakes, but have already rectified the grammar mistakes of the first chapter. So please readers. Give this newbie a chance and read my hard work as much as you can and support me. I cannot do this without you guys. TRUST ME WHEN I SAY THAT I HAVE BEEN IMPROVING. AAAAAAAAAA (Goes Ultra Instinct)

3yr
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SinadinLv3

Another Author Review here. READERS...PLEASE DON'T DROP THIS BECAUSE OF THE EARLY CHAPTERS. IF IT FEELS RUSHED TO YOU, PLEASE KEEP ON READING... I AM EDITING MY CHAPTERS ONE BY ONE EACH DAY.. THAT IS ALSO THE REASON WHY MY UPDATES ARE SLOW. THE FUTURE CHAPTER QUALITY HAS ALSO GREATLY INCREASED. SO PLEASE DON'T JUMP THE GUN RIGHT AWAY. I hope you read it till the first volume before making assumptions. Thank you.

3yr
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RhudeeLv13

Yeah I said I was gunna wait until 100+ chapters, but the mc's mentality is like a 10 year olds, you would think that after he has killed more than probably 100000+ monsters, he would be more idk, mature but he just keeps acting like a 13 year old. I can get some of the reactions like meeting his family after years, but I think other things are a tab bit exaggerated. Other than that the world Background was probably the best aspect. But I like that the author is replying to the comments, and is active so i'll give it a 4 star to support the novel.

3yr
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ReimossLv14

Filled with fake ratings, garbage novel that doesn't make sense, I can't believe there can be so many spammed 5 star reviews made by level 1 and 2 accounts. It disgusts me, made me waste my time reading this thing.

3yr
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REDVILv4

This would be so much more better if the mc wasn't such a pervert like seriously dude it's just disappointing to see him act like that.

3yr
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Bogdan7Lv6

this seems like something a 10-12 years old would write....and the way its written too.... a lot of logic erors too.... the way to beat a high defense is to add range??? a lot of fake reviews too......

3yr
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Dark_LordLv13

Reveal spoiler

3yr
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humas_arerealLv2

i dislike the writing style in the earlier chapters of the book and i dislike it for the sole reason it feels more like your reading someone roleplaying rather than a book with thoroughly explained concepts making you feel like your inside the book, due to the fact it's written like that i can't actually imagine or find the drive to continue reading i stopped early in the book for the way actions were described it'll probably be better later but i can't find the will to read anymore

3yr
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Sunil334Lv1

DAYUM. I was totally scared out of my pants when i woke up this morning and founf your work deleted. I found thisbl again thankfully and read the chapters I hadn't yet......... AND I LOVE IT.... WE HAVE AN OFFICIAL SHIP NOW 😂😂. HOPE I SEE THAT COUPLE MORE IN THE LATER CHAPTERS. PLEASE CONTINUE UPDATING. DONT STOPPPPPP

3yr
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Solo_BiriBiriBiriLv2

I think author should delete the spammed reviews because it's too much. Anyways, the plot and concept is kinda interesting but the execution is lacking. HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHU HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHU HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHU l

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