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Bogdan7
Bogdan7Lv63yr
2021-07-24 19:26

this seems like something a 10-12 years old would write....and the way its written too.... a lot of logic erors too.... the way to beat a high defense is to add range??? a lot of fake reviews too......

The Cheat Seed

Sinadin
4.5
143 Chs

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Daoisttyy
DaoisttyyLv5

I know right and it had potential to be something when I read the first chapter but after that it all just goes downhill

3yr
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Sinadin
SinadinLv3

I'm sorry. But it was written when I did not know about it whatsoever. And the first chapter was the newly edited one. I AM STILL EDITING IT AND YEA CORRECTING UNLOGICAL THINGS. But man its a novel and a world of fantasy. Things will not correspond to Logic like always.

3yr
Sinadin
SinadinLv3

Sorry for the poor work. Actually I edited the first chapter and the others were undergoing editing as well. 😅😅 sorry for making your hopes high.

Daoisttyy:I know right and it had potential to be something when I read the first chapter but after that it all just goes downhill
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KaidoDLuffy
KaidoDLuffyLv5

you know even fantasy still have basic logic and reality...like even someone doesn't have a seed that the novel talking about no one i guess would go straight and jump at a top of a building without thinking just to suicide.. And even if you have a really good friend that willing to help in desperate needs.. no best friend can pass/give his god given oppurtunity just to comfort a fool/idiot friend... you know some exaggerations needs moderation.. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Sinadin:I'm sorry. But it was written when I did not know about it whatsoever. And the first chapter was the newly edited one. I AM STILL EDITING IT AND YEA CORRECTING UNLOGICAL THINGS. But man its a novel and a world of fantasy. Things will not correspond to Logic like always.
3yr
5
Sinadin
SinadinLv3

Yep!! Thanks for that!

KaidoDLuffy:you know even fantasy still have basic logic and reality...like even someone doesn't have a seed that the novel talking about no one i guess would go straight and jump at a top of a building without thinking just to suicide.. And even if you have a really good friend that willing to help in desperate needs.. no best friend can pass/give his god given oppurtunity just to comfort a fool/idiot friend... you know some exaggerations needs moderation.. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Sinadin
SinadinLv3

The Author Here. Currently writing this review to deliver news to you guys. I started this work 5 months ago and had dropped it on the second day itself. and then picked it up 3 months ago. My grammar and English were so childish and cringe back then and I believe I have improved a lot recently because of coming in contact with other fabulous writers. The work is undergoing editing. I have been editing my chapters from the beginning itself one by one. People who read the prologue or people who have already survived (😂) through the beginning chaps might find a lot of changes in the starting chapters. Because I have edited it all out. Talking about the editing, I am currently only editing for spelling mistakes, but have already rectified the grammar mistakes of the first chapter. So please readers. Give this newbie a chance and read my hard work as much as you can and support me. I cannot do this without you guys. TRUST ME WHEN I SAY THAT I HAVE BEEN IMPROVING. AAAAAAAAAA (Goes Ultra Instinct)

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Sinadin
SinadinLv3

Another Author Review here. READERS...PLEASE DON'T DROP THIS BECAUSE OF THE EARLY CHAPTERS. IF IT FEELS RUSHED TO YOU, PLEASE KEEP ON READING... I AM EDITING MY CHAPTERS ONE BY ONE EACH DAY.. THAT IS ALSO THE REASON WHY MY UPDATES ARE SLOW. THE FUTURE CHAPTER QUALITY HAS ALSO GREATLY INCREASED. SO PLEASE DON'T JUMP THE GUN RIGHT AWAY. I hope you read it till the first volume before making assumptions. Thank you.

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Rhudee
RhudeeLv14

Yeah I said I was gunna wait until 100+ chapters, but the mc's mentality is like a 10 year olds, you would think that after he has killed more than probably 100000+ monsters, he would be more idk, mature but he just keeps acting like a 13 year old. I can get some of the reactions like meeting his family after years, but I think other things are a tab bit exaggerated. Other than that the world Background was probably the best aspect. But I like that the author is replying to the comments, and is active so i'll give it a 4 star to support the novel.

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Reimoss
ReimossLv14

Filled with fake ratings, garbage novel that doesn't make sense, I can't believe there can be so many spammed 5 star reviews made by level 1 and 2 accounts. It disgusts me, made me waste my time reading this thing.

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REDVI
REDVILv4

This would be so much more better if the mc wasn't such a pervert like seriously dude it's just disappointing to see him act like that.

3yr
Dark_Lord
Dark_LordLv13

Reveal spoiler

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humas_arereal
humas_arerealLv2

i dislike the writing style in the earlier chapters of the book and i dislike it for the sole reason it feels more like your reading someone roleplaying rather than a book with thoroughly explained concepts making you feel like your inside the book, due to the fact it's written like that i can't actually imagine or find the drive to continue reading i stopped early in the book for the way actions were described it'll probably be better later but i can't find the will to read anymore

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Sunil334
Sunil334Lv1

DAYUM. I was totally scared out of my pants when i woke up this morning and founf your work deleted. I found thisbl again thankfully and read the chapters I hadn't yet......... AND I LOVE IT.... WE HAVE AN OFFICIAL SHIP NOW 😂😂. HOPE I SEE THAT COUPLE MORE IN THE LATER CHAPTERS. PLEASE CONTINUE UPDATING. DONT STOPPPPPP

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Solo_BiriBiriBiri
Solo_BiriBiriBiriLv2

I think author should delete the spammed reviews because it's too much. Anyways, the plot and concept is kinda interesting but the execution is lacking. HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHU HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHU HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHE HIHIHIHI HOHOHOHO HUHUHUHUHU l

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