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NotStupidReader
NotStupidReaderAuthor3yr
2021-06-12 15:17

Hey guys!! A typical shameless author’s review is here. First of all, I’d like to say thanks to anyone who is reading this novel and supporting me. You know, every view, review, collection, and power stone mean so much to me. They give me motivations to continue writing this story. Alright, that’s enough for the formality. Let’s talk about the storyline. The story is mainly about an MC going back in time to fix the past and create a new/different future for him and human race. But as the story progresses, the MC will realize and discover that there is much more to the supposed simple backstory of his regression. As for what it is or what they are, you have to read it yourself. Now, for the story’s pace. For the reason of I want to lay as solid foundation as possible to the story, it might cause the pace of the story to be moderate at most at the beginning. Especially, the first 15 chapters of which being focused on some basic knowledge about magic, Ortus, tutorial, his future organization, his friends, and many more. That’s why, when the story progresses to tutorial ark or Ortus ark, you would not get confused with the info dump. Last but not least, the plots of the story. I can only tell you that, I’ve already planned the main concept and some big events to half of the volume 3. It is just a plan though, it might get changed into another one if I find something better or new inspiration. P.S: English is not my first language, so, please bear with me :D

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BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

Loving the book so far on chapter 2 1 Major problem lack of chapters prevents binge reading

MarkkoYusek
MarkkoYusekLv2

this is harem?

NotStupidReader
NotStupidReaderAuthor

It's up to a person's point of view. Tbh, MC will 'make love' with many women in the future but there will be not much romance.

MarkkoYusek:this is harem?
rishit1
rishit1Lv4

means.....no female lead only night stands?

NotStupidReader:It's up to a person's point of view. Tbh, MC will 'make love' with many women in the future but there will be not much romance.
NotStupidReader
NotStupidReaderAuthor

There are many females in the story but they will only be side characters, with some of them can be considered 'half' female leads.

rishit1:means.....no female lead only night stands?
bigD24
bigD24Lv2

Great job, please build the world and paint our imaginations author-sama.

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

Well thats off putting. Guess ill leave this for another time. Well there's also the op tag if hes spending time with woman then I'm guessing that's a fake op tag since he won't be training alot

NotStupidReader:It's up to a person's point of view. Tbh, MC will 'make love' with many women in the future but there will be not much romance.
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

your reply isn't showing however thats a fake op mc then since there's a possibility of him struggling or losing

NotStupidReader
NotStupidReaderAuthor

Em… I mean he is OP when he uses magic, but when he does not use magic, he will have to struggle a bit. Still, so far 105 chapters of this story, the MC doesn't receive even a scatch yet from battles, though. Is that OP enough?

DeathLingers:your reply isn't showing however thats a fake op mc then since there's a possibility of him struggling or losing
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

that seems pretty good then. I'll probably like it, just have to ignore all the boring woman parts

NotStupidReader:Em… I mean he is OP when he uses magic, but when he does not use magic, he will have to struggle a bit. Still, so far 105 chapters of this story, the MC doesn't receive even a scatch yet from battles, though. Is that OP enough?
NotStupidReader
NotStupidReaderAuthor

After going past chapter 30 if you still don't like this story, please don't hesitate to drop it. I… I won't cry, I promi… uwaaa~ uwaaa~

DeathLingers:that seems pretty good then. I'll probably like it, just have to ignore all the boring woman parts
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

I should enjoy it ill only be upset if he looses a fight or that and since you said he won't then I've got good hopes of him actually being op. since lately people think that its OK to put an op tag yet have a weak to strong mc. since a weak to strong mc has to struggle and maybe loose fights. so ill probably enjoy this, I just may get annoyed with the woman stuff

NotStupidReader:After going past chapter 30 if you still don't like this story, please don't hesitate to drop it. I… I won't cry, I promi… uwaaa~ uwaaa~
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tatsuya_K_O_A
tatsuya_K_O_ALv14

why is the having woman part so annoying or upsetting for you?? whats wrong with that???

DeathLingers:I should enjoy it ill only be upset if he looses a fight or that and since you said he won't then I've got good hopes of him actually being op. since lately people think that its OK to put an op tag yet have a weak to strong mc. since a weak to strong mc has to struggle and maybe loose fights. so ill probably enjoy this, I just may get annoyed with the woman stuff
Glezeri
GlezeriLv15

So is this novel dead? It was great so far but with the lack of updates the fans will probably forget about it an webnovel will buri it if it ever starts updating again

RealmWriter
RealmWriterLv4

when more chaps?

angel1v1
angel1v1Lv1

love this book

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iOnlyEatDinner
iOnlyEatDinnerLv5

I have to say the idea for the novel is really good and interesting enough to pull you in, however I have a list of things that could be improved upon. - First of, excessive technicalities. I get that there are a lot of thoughts behind the magical sides of this novel for world-building's sake, however the made-up technical stuffs feels too much of a filler. Even after reading the 50+ chapters, it feels like I've only read 10 chapters of other novels for how little things has happened. Considering the word count per chapter, the excessive technicalities ended up affecting the story progression. - Next is the MC's character being all over the place. It's like his character is suffering due to forceful attempts for comic relief. During his time on earth before the tutorial, he feels like a goal-driven MC similar to korean MCs of the same novel genre. However when he entered the tutorial, he became more like an arrogant self-entitled chinese MC. I don't know if it's to make him "cool", or "quirky" and set apart from the others because he used to be strong, but it feels more like he's being obnoxious. - Then there's the case for author's hindsight. Holding out details and explanations to what is actually happening behind the scenes is actually a double-edged weapon. Remember to always think of how things look like in your readers' eyes. If you hold an information that will spoil the story for the readers if they know it early, then that's good. But if it turned out to be something that wouldn't change anything if known, or maybe make the readers anticipate what's going to happen, then you're merely taking away the readers' eyes. It's a choice between mystery and later surprising revelation, and early revelation that could be looked forward to as to how it will turn out in the future.

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