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Mehmehmeh
MehmehmehLv153yr
2021-06-23 11:37

This story bland and boring The MC is a arrogant young master beta male virgin character type, those should never be mixed together let alone be a MC. .........i could probably type a lot more but these are the major problems with this book and i don’t want to waste anymore time on this, it’s just not worth it.

Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece

Your_host_HK
4.3
87 Chs

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KIMPOtripin
KIMPOtripinLv3

I mean at first it was good but then the story just turned into pokemon

3yr
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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

That's some weird paradox, comrade. That's shouldn't exist.

3yr
Maulann
MaulannLv5

Like u can make an interesting story? I bet you are just some fckng nerd who shut down himself in his own cave. Thats make ur life boring

3yr
Mehmehmeh
MehmehmehLv15

Yep living the dream, there is more room in the cave if you want to join too.😏

Maulann:Like u can make an interesting story? I bet you are just some fckng nerd who shut down himself in his own cave. Thats make ur life boring
3yr
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ZoneTail
ZoneTailLv5

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆○ - not really 4, but I will give 4☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆○○ - too fast. the lack of context makes the story boring. ▪︎Character Design...........☆○○○○ - huge disappointment on the character Design. the mc was reincarnated as Luffy, because of the system he end up looking like Madara. - so the mc's name is luffy with madara's body who can transform into a dragon(sigh) + 5 elements. (you could have at least change his name or just make an oc mc, but no imma be luffy and the same time looks like madara) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○ 《Overall 3.2》

3yr

Your_host_HK
Your_host_HKAuthor

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Just trying to improve my ratings.

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Spike009
Spike009Lv4

A very good novel. And Author has kept it interesting so far. Which is what some novels are unable to do. For now the world is one piece. And it’s been written well.

3yr
I_am_inevitable
I_am_inevitableLv14

It's just your average wishes/reincarnation novel nothing special.

3yr
Golias
GoliasLv5

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Retro_
Retro_Lv3

I don't give many harsh ratings but I will give to this book. Mc is what u will call a young master type mc who likes to be toxic and loves collecting girls... He is luffy but with Madara's body, Author could have just made him an Oc but no he soes not eant to create his own plot so makes him luffy. This in other words is a typical fan-fic of this site which is not worth reading in my opinion.

3yr
Shaska
ShaskaLv3

I feel that many times the ones that give 5 stars are multi-accounts or bots... ...........................................................................

3yr
grigrait
grigraitLv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
VEYN
VEYNLv2

Интересно, жду продолжение...................................................................................................................

3yr
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