complete come on

Just watching the terminology of Chinese novels in mtl makes me hate the novel keep it up my hero

Man, you're taking a week or 10 weeks late just for this chapter

Read the profile of the evil villain

I left the ridiculous novel when you start talking about penis length I left the ridiculous novel when you start talking about penis length I left the ridiculous novel when you start talking about penis length I left the ridiculous novel when you start talking about penis length

Well the stories I see flaws are stories you like, Lino Chan. I thought you might know a good story

Advice from a brother to his brothers, do not read this nonsense ................ Contains love at first sight for every girl........................... .................................................. Silly events

Why would Naruto say these words? Just because you're an American, you don't include these things in Naruto's character. And why does he help others to become stronger and not care about his son?

Hey man, just a few things need tweaking and keep going on this story it's awesome awesome awesome I still want to know will he take the frost demon bloodline? Or become an Android? Or take Babedi's magical knowledge? Pretend to be a Babedi soldier and get a power-up? Lots of crazy things Just complete the story and my rating will be 5 stars

What is the use of this energy?

And why did you take the time? You could have built and developed the character instead of making him another stupid man

Well first I don't understand what ability the protagonist has secondly we have to understand the character of the protagonist Third we are tired of fan novels that take the original story path unchanged Don't try to make the Zappoza arc exist even man you are not the unlucky Naruto who will get this Exactly the mission, and also, raising Sasuke's talent and power doesn't make him like the original story. Give him some illusion talents and higher abilities than Chunin, and other than the Mangekyo ability, doesn't make it the Amateros, it's a useless ability.

Stupid Who will get rid of a person of the level of a Kage just to please another village? If he will satisfy the rest of the villages and then declare war? Silly nonsense and why Rasa? He is a strong person Choose any weak person or tell a spy that he killed another spy

Wtf

I've never written anything good before and I liked the idea. Read adventure time fan stories out there about the player system but what's the point the player system won't even get you to any good level in the adventure time world.

Max is an ordinary man who has become in an imaginary world, so as long as he does not treat everything as a fantasy world and does anything without conscience, he is an ordinary man who is not evil. He is 600 years old and does not care about friendship or fun, so the comparison is completely wrong. He is in the end just an ordinary man. Why is he brainwashing? Those close to him will make him empty this has feelings in the end

I don't care. The goals and personalities are different. There is no reason for Max to sacrifice his friends, and Max is a person whose age is not 600 years old to see friendship as nothing. And if he didn't sacrifice his friends or was more evil, this would make Fang Yuan better? Why the comparison? What they lived is completely different, how can he be without any humanity and live bleak all his life just to look more evil what you do is a childish thing

Yes, it is not just a cheap fan story called a novel. Other than that, it is just a stupidity to the mind of the viewer like the rest of the ntr Who will leave her husband or lover and become a whore?

By the living reality where the most dangerous gangs live is not as dangerous as being from Iraq

Brother please leave the phone for a while and talk to anyone believe me you will thank me go for a walk or a restaurant you may find a friend