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2021-12-16 16:48

I was hooked after a few chapters and haven’t even considered stopping. I just finished all current chapters (through 144) with no regrets, and I’m eager for each new update. I’d definitely recommend this read! Check out this book’s tags, they’re pretty accurate. (Except it needs a romance tag, too!) I have definitely been I giggling, snickering, and thoroughly frustrated (when the story calls for it), and I credit that to the author’s story telling. It’s not trashy—pretty clean so far, actually— and I like it that way. Anyone can write trash, but I’m more interested in an author convincing me that two people are actually in love. It’s a slow burn, but I think that’s needed when you have two characters at odds from the beginning. I looove the way they interact, though! In fact, I like all the characters, and you get quite a variety. I don’t think this is a slow start, but if you want instant action, you’ll need to stick with it for a couple chapters as the author sets the scene, introduces more characters (instead of dumping them on you all at once), and gets the plot moving. But you won’t be disappointed. I don’t feel like any of the chapters were wasted, they all served a purpose in building the story for an enjoyable read. There are some typing/grammatical errors, but it doesn’t really detract for me. The updates are very regular, and the author always gives bonus chapters for meeting goals. If you like being in contact with an author, I think she does a good job of responding to comments she clarifying any questions. Thank you for a great book in my library! 🧡

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