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RedSonia
RedSoniaLv153yr
2021-08-05 18:47

This story has potential. The FL is a kind and smart princess. I like novels with strong female leads and I have my fingers crossed that Silja doesn't turn into an enamored flimsy person who melts whenever ML gets into visual range just because he is handsome. The ML seems to be coldhearted and manipulative, and I hope that Silja stays clearheaded and gives him some hard time. 😉 The novel has mystery and magic and I can't wait to see what will happen next. The author gives an advance warning that English is not her first language, and it shows. However, the errors are not very bad and they didn't stop me from understanding what's going on. An editor or the help of some proofreading tool (like Grammarly) will definitely raise the level of readability and it will be easier to enjoy the ride. Overall, I recommend this novel to readers who love fantasy. 👍

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Dream_blue98
Dream_blue98Author

Thank you for your valuable review. ill work on the loose ends🙂😊

MiizStudz
MiizStudzLv14

are you going to release the rest of the book? I do not want to start reading it if I can not finish it. most are still on privileged but it's sitting last ch released 11 moths ago?

Dream_blue98:Thank you for your valuable review. ill work on the loose ends🙂😊
Tara_Qadry
Tara_QadryLv4

why is she not updating anymore?? last updated is 2 month ago but till now there is no updates and this is not even completed yet.. please say to author to update complete story

MiizStudz
MiizStudzLv14

are you to finish the book??? if not, I will not start reading it.

Dream_blue98:Thank you for your valuable review. ill work on the loose ends🙂😊
Dream_blue98
Dream_blue98Author

Well im trying to finish it but no promises at this point

MiizStudz:are you to finish the book??? if not, I will not start reading it.
MiizStudz
MiizStudzLv14

too bad. so many good stories left unfinished. but it's always better late then never and a brief 3 chapter summary describing rest of story and end is better then no end at all. if u really really couldn't finish at least readers won't be left hanging.. good luck!

Dream_blue98:Well im trying to finish it but no promises at this point
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Aysel_Inara
Aysel_InaraLv10

[Reviewed on: 12-10-2021] [Reading status: 11 chapters] ● Strength: - A considerate and 'everyone's loved' sister and daughter FL is waiting for you to be saved. Well, she's not exactly a white lotus since I'm betting on her strong personality (she listens to her heart and observes things) I think and I believe she will use her brain too I near future. - The plotline is hate-to-love relationship, however the tension of the atmosphere which the author has created can be imagined effortlessly. - The major strong factor is the emphasis on every character's emotions and thoughts. Benjamin is protective, while the parents are mysterious yet trying their best to keep the daughter safe. Apart from Silja, the rest characters revolving around her are also fully developed, even her maid. - The reader gets immersed in the tension created from chapter 3 and can predict the potential plotline but I'm counting on the author for deviation. (ps, the title of the work) - What caught my attention was the chapter one and mirror, owff~ - The male lead is your renowned playboy, abusive, probably torn emotionally and gives a 'fix me' vibe. But let's hope the fl wwil not bow down to him. - Despite English being author's 3rd language the narration is highly readable. ● Weakness: - There's no distinction between the notes & chapter content in 6th 6nd 8th chapter, which caused confusion and disrupts the flow. [Overall remarks: Conspiracy filled romance with round characters. Except supernatural and action. Serious tone and requires focus.]

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