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the_goat_4880
the_goat_4880Lv13yr
2021-11-10 10:02

Don't usually read romance but this was pretty enjoyable, the main character is strong willed, much better than trashy weak willed throughout whole story type of mc, descriptions and execution of plot points done well too, what drags the story down is the mediocre writing quality, I can tell the author tries hard in his descriptions and depictions but wether it is because of English being a secondary language or lack of knowledge on the written word, the word choice and sentence structure is not that great, quite a bit of grammatical errors too, I would recommend you work on your writing quality, because everything else is good.

Mistress Of Enchanting Dragon

Dream_blue98
4.7
464 Chs

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Thank you so much. I'll try to improve in lacking area 🙂.

3yr
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RedSonia
RedSoniaLv15

This story has potential. The FL is a kind and smart princess. I like novels with strong female leads and I have my fingers crossed that Silja doesn't turn into an enamored flimsy person who melts whenever ML gets into visual range just because he is handsome. The ML seems to be coldhearted and manipulative, and I hope that Silja stays clearheaded and gives him some hard time. 😉 The novel has mystery and magic and I can't wait to see what will happen next. The author gives an advance warning that English is not her first language, and it shows. However, the errors are not very bad and they didn't stop me from understanding what's going on. An editor or the help of some proofreading tool (like Grammarly) will definitely raise the level of readability and it will be easier to enjoy the ride. Overall, I recommend this novel to readers who love fantasy. 👍

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Aysel_Inara
Aysel_InaraLv10

[Reviewed on: 12-10-2021] [Reading status: 11 chapters] ● Strength: - A considerate and 'everyone's loved' sister and daughter FL is waiting for you to be saved. Well, she's not exactly a white lotus since I'm betting on her strong personality (she listens to her heart and observes things) I think and I believe she will use her brain too I near future. - The plotline is hate-to-love relationship, however the tension of the atmosphere which the author has created can be imagined effortlessly. - The major strong factor is the emphasis on every character's emotions and thoughts. Benjamin is protective, while the parents are mysterious yet trying their best to keep the daughter safe. Apart from Silja, the rest characters revolving around her are also fully developed, even her maid. - The reader gets immersed in the tension created from chapter 3 and can predict the potential plotline but I'm counting on the author for deviation. (ps, the title of the work) - What caught my attention was the chapter one and mirror, owff~ - The male lead is your renowned playboy, abusive, probably torn emotionally and gives a 'fix me' vibe. But let's hope the fl wwil not bow down to him. - Despite English being author's 3rd language the narration is highly readable. ● Weakness: - There's no distinction between the notes & chapter content in 6th 6nd 8th chapter, which caused confusion and disrupts the flow. [Overall remarks: Conspiracy filled romance with round characters. Except supernatural and action. Serious tone and requires focus.]

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imperfectlyperfect
imperfectlyperfectLv14

lt's 5* for me even in spite of typos here and there. lt's a book l picked to read in daily recommendation only for 200 points but couldn't drop l love it. A refreshing book after reading so many transmigration novels. There's no rush, the story is growing at a steady pace but still able to arrest your attention and keep you curious at the same time. l love leads with strength, character and mysterious background, this novel gave me too, Silja and Don. l also love that l can't predict what will happen next. A novel with great potential.

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Apprentice4
Apprentice4Lv5

I would've never expected myself to be drawn in to a fictional world and relating myself with a fictional characters so easily. I could easily feel the motivation of the characters and their interactions only made me hungry for MOARR. kudos to the author, must recommend.

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Jecinta_Uwakwe
Jecinta_UwakweLv1

this novel is more than interesting I love it but this is frustrating I can unlock the other chapters

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Raghav_Khurana
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This book is really nice..... I read other book of yours too and they are not comparable Both are really good THE STORY IN THIS ONE IS AWESOMEEEEEE

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tanu_sam
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Oh my Naughty Dreamie is back with smut filled ride, dudeee😳😳😳. Let me take a breath for a moment, ..... Ahhhhhhhhhh....owwww myyyy dear lord of lord! I smell smut! Yes smut 😣🥰🥰....Like a moth attracted to flame, I am attracted to Silja and the dark prince's dark love story! Don't forget to give me spoilers pleaseee.....

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jdbeue
jdbeueLv4

The story is fine. It takes a while to kick off, but after that, it is interesting. There were a few hitches with the grammar and a few continuity issues. Other than that, this is a pretty good book.

3yr
Noble_Racheal
Noble_RachealLv1

Wow author such a great novel Can't wait to hear what happens next Can't wait to read what happens next Keep up the good work And pls there are little corrections in it most especially when addressing he/she

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Mackaina
MackainaLv1

Both the male and female leads were well written from the start. I like that we get a look into each of their lives and get to know them before they meet. The story itself has an interesting concept to get any fantasy lover to keep reading! Great story so far.

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