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Forst_Lost
Forst_LostLv142yr
2022-02-01 12:58

If you like a story in which all characters AREN'T complete trash, this definitely isn't the novel for you. Author seems to get enjoyment in having control and power over how much he can make the 'MC' suffer. The entirety of the novel goes like this -> MC lacks information -> MC encounters an arrogant/scheming character/group -> Those people/group tries to walk over the MC and take advantage of him -> Makes enemies with major group or important individual (through no fault of his own -> MC gets chased/almost killed -> MC gets power up. Not to mention that every area he enters he is almost immediately taken captive/forced to do something stupid. His only parent (father) is supposedly very powerful from a big family yet just left his son without ANY PREPARATION for essentially an apocalypse. The world he came from was UNIFIED, yet his grandfather (THE EMPEROR) encourages everyone to chase/KILL his grandson "for his own benefit". Even to the last chapter I read, everything I read is exactly like this...just bigger enemies and more complicated schemes. Unless you are completely masochistic or sadistic (like watching the MC suffer throughout his entire life) I suggest NOT picking up this novel. Waste of time and effort.

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Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv4

I see this kind of novels from time to time, there was even in one that the libral atmosphere had a will and wanted to kill the mc so he couldn't even breath I don't get why people enjoy these type of novel its just like they are trying to copy bersek in the worst way possible

Veinydique
VeinydiqueLv14

I remember the time when I was reading Against The Gods which had a different formula but was essentially the same. These types of novels just make me want to flip tables in rage. But relatively new readers are suckers for these novels.

GifflarGod
GifflarGodLv14

Yeah it's tiresome to read these kind of novels.. feels like mc can't take a breath.. from one fight to an another and isn't in control of his own journey

SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

I always thought I was the only one who felt this way because no one outside of myself would ever leave comments about this kind of stuff on the LNs that I read like this. I'm glade I'm not the only one who can see how bad this kind of thing really is.

GifflarGod:Yeah it's tiresome to read these kind of novels.. feels like mc can't take a breath.. from one fight to an another and isn't in control of his own journey
DaoistMQc4Nw
DaoistMQc4NwLv12

can you name some novel you like? you implied that you've been Reading for a longer time, i mean 9/10 of novel i've read in web novel has this kind of cliches, same theme like system,

Veinydique:I remember the time when I was reading Against The Gods which had a different formula but was essentially the same. These types of novels just make me want to flip tables in rage. But relatively new readers are suckers for these novels.
Veinydique
VeinydiqueLv14

I can name a few like: A will eternal, Overlord, Dungeon defense, The second coming of gluttony, Lord of the mysteries, My pick up artist system, Naked sword art, Profane prince of domination, The sinful life of the emperor, Beware of chicken, Alpha cultivation,... If you want to read some published works, try Kings of the Wyld and The Rage of Dragons.

DaoistMQc4Nw:can you name some novel you like? you implied that you've been Reading for a longer time, i mean 9/10 of novel i've read in web novel has this kind of cliches, same theme like system,
Keeper_everwood
Keeper_everwoodLv15

Yeah...thanks for the review. Novels were the MC is always struggling for survival really wears me out. I've read Against the Gods and a couple more in this trope. They were entertaining novels but oh boy....did i self-torture myself to go through the stress of reading those chapter.

hello_there_6426
hello_there_6426Lv13

Renegade Immortal is one of the absolute best cultivation novels out there but the MC suffers so much :(

Keeper_everwood:Yeah...thanks for the review. Novels were the MC is always struggling for survival really wears me out. I've read Against the Gods and a couple more in this trope. They were entertaining novels but oh boy....did i self-torture myself to go through the stress of reading those chapter.
Jerome_Evans_2442
Jerome_Evans_2442Lv12

man Mc is a beta male simping over Aina

Shivam_Thakur_1883
Shivam_Thakur_1883Lv12

that's helped me a lot. I really hate this type of novel.

Ornoth
OrnothLv13

Glad I read this before diving deeper. Thanks

Imran_Boluwatife
Imran_BoluwatifeLv1

exactly what I thought, there is no controlled pace in this story, it's all just continuous action and trying to continuously climax without taking a breather, you just get tired and want the mc to calm down, look around and take things in, but that doesn't seem to be possible in this novel even 600+ chapters into the novel.

GifflarGod:Yeah it's tiresome to read these kind of novels.. feels like mc can't take a breath.. from one fight to an another and isn't in control of his own journey
Balloon_Enthusiast
Balloon_EnthusiastLv2

agreed. I'm someone who likes overpowered MCs. so, in stores like these, I'll prefer mc to have at least some amount of control over his situation

Dash6217
Dash6217Lv14

The second coming of gluttony isn't it the novel with one of the worst MCs that act like a naive Japanese isekai protagonist despite being like over 20 and being a former alcoholic gambling addict? If it is I dropped it because of the MC

Veinydique:I can name a few like: A will eternal, Overlord, Dungeon defense, The second coming of gluttony, Lord of the mysteries, My pick up artist system, Naked sword art, Profane prince of domination, The sinful life of the emperor, Beware of chicken, Alpha cultivation,... If you want to read some published works, try Kings of the Wyld and The Rage of Dragons.
wesley_Lima
wesley_LimaLv2

Thank you!

Veinydique:I can name a few like: A will eternal, Overlord, Dungeon defense, The second coming of gluttony, Lord of the mysteries, My pick up artist system, Naked sword art, Profane prince of domination, The sinful life of the emperor, Beware of chicken, Alpha cultivation,... If you want to read some published works, try Kings of the Wyld and The Rage of Dragons.
Sure_Wai
Sure_WaiLv4

good

Veinydique:I can name a few like: A will eternal, Overlord, Dungeon defense, The second coming of gluttony, Lord of the mysteries, My pick up artist system, Naked sword art, Profane prince of domination, The sinful life of the emperor, Beware of chicken, Alpha cultivation,... If you want to read some published works, try Kings of the Wyld and The Rage of Dragons.
Immortallord
ImmortallordLv12

Just wanted to inform everyone of this awesome new novel. Anyone that decides to give this novel a chance after reading this surely won't regret it. The name of the novel is: Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled

kill_zone58
kill_zone58Lv4

you should read 'The oracle paths"

DaoistMQc4Nw:can you name some novel you like? you implied that you've been Reading for a longer time, i mean 9/10 of novel i've read in web novel has this kind of cliches, same theme like system,
Nobody09
Nobody09Lv3

i waste my time on trash thx

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