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Snoring_PandaAuthor3yr
2021-06-20 16:59

Hello, Author here. I decided to write this novel because of my love for alchemy in cultivation novels. while there will be every cultivation-related plot point going on in the series, it will mostly focus on Alchemy. I tried to make the MC clueless about cultivation at first, and that came off as being dumb initially. however, that changes within the first 10 chapters. Please do give it a read, especially if you like Alchemy as I do.

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ThighLoverLv3

Full Metal Alchemist

Snoring_PandaAuthor

Go ahead. i will answer them if i can.

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Ahiraf_MirakLv2

Is this a harem?

Snoring_PandaAuthor

I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.

Ahiraf_Mirak:Is this a harem?
ArashiTenebrisLv5

Even if you did, remember to write a actual character rather than just another doll for the mc to 'gotta catch them all' like collection there without their own goal and personality. I recommend check this video '10 BEST TIPS FOR WRITING WOMEN' (fun fact: even some female author struggle to write good female character due to the media stereotype about woman for their whole life)

Snoring_Panda:I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.
Snoring_PandaAuthor

Thank you for that. I will check it out.

ArashiTenebris:Even if you did, remember to write a actual character rather than just another doll for the mc to 'gotta catch them all' like collection there without their own goal and personality. I recommend check this video '10 BEST TIPS FOR WRITING WOMEN' (fun fact: even some female author struggle to write good female character due to the media stereotype about woman for their whole life)
Snoring_PandaAuthor

People can't cultivate out of the game, if that's what you are worried about.

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Drifting_EmbersLv4

yeah, that's what I was asking, ok thanks

Snoring_Panda:People can't cultivate out of the game, if that's what you are worried about.
NyankoDanLv13

Finally a alchemy centred novel, what world are we living in?

Dao_of_infinityLv15

can you make it so that I can read all of them without spending coins or fastpass. because I have no money

MonarchofchaosLv2

I hope it’s not. There’s to many harems out there tbh

Snoring_Panda:I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.
ParagonofsinLv1

Hope it’s not bro stick with 1 fml

Snoring_Panda:I don't think so. but it's still too early into the series to tell that. I might change it depending on where I go with the story.
ParagonofsinLv1

Still rather have 1 fml

ArashiTenebris:Even if you did, remember to write a actual character rather than just another doll for the mc to 'gotta catch them all' like collection there without their own goal and personality. I recommend check this video '10 BEST TIPS FOR WRITING WOMEN' (fun fact: even some female author struggle to write good female character due to the media stereotype about woman for their whole life)
Rick_AiresLv3

ok, i really like alchemy, so I'm going to read it, and ignore the mc being dumb in the first 10. thanks for ur work

DaZZHea_7132Lv2

Author what do you mean that he's dumb by only 10 chapters ? He is dumb the whole time It is already 195 chapters but he's still annoying stupid

_Tea_Lover_Lv15

Hey, off topic, but when's the next episode of ultimate monster evolution?

Snoring_Panda:People can't cultivate out of the game, if that's what you are worried about.
Snoring_PandaAuthor

honestly no idea. I am swamped with writing 5 chaps a day with the other 2 books. once I get a hang of the load and can write more, I will continue it. Didn't want it to go through an early phase of neglect like energy did.

_Tea_Lover_:Hey, off topic, but when's the next episode of ultimate monster evolution?
DaoistYO1WpqLv1

nice one

Kaishepard28Lv15

try the ten realms series by Michael chatfield

issei_kozukiLv3

for the love of god please give him some braincells . i will even donate .

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PoeticSonicLv4

so i will first go through the two high scores but first I want to say something THE AUTHOR IS A FREAKING LIER AND A BIG TIME LIER AT THAT! going back to the two high scores, he has stable updates, and even though the world background isn't original and highly limited it's not bad, though if I could I would have given it a 3.5, not a 4. now for the writing quality, not saying that I'm a genius in writing or a stickler for grammar, I'm not. and I normally don't complain about non-proper grammatical sentences and I won't here, the problem is that the writing style is very awkward although it's still readable, the style seems like we are reading a list of things that the mc is doing rather than experiencing the moment with the mc. it was highly prominent a the start and lessened slightly later on and if the 2 things I'm gonna talk about weren't so bad the awkward writing style wouldn't have been a total dealbreaker. story development, eh, actually I'm kinda torn. i like how the other characters aren't your stereotypical "you dare! you seem to have eyes but not have seen mount tai" but the main problem is with the MC, he I supposed to focus on cultivation so he specifically joins a sect that specializes in pill making yet the story bends backward to keep the mc as naive as possible, they literally teach him NOTHING LITERALLY NOTHING and that's the ACTUAL theme of the novel, total idiotic (yes e instead of an I was done on purpose) nativity. he also gets everything without any effort. character design, I would have actually given the character design a 2 or 3 if the mc was normal stupid, but this MC would not be accepted In the "special" class at school, they need the special version of the special version of the special class to nearly keep up with the mc's ritardedness. forget 3 brain cells or no brain cells, I'm pretty sure this dude has a high negative IQ probably the most idiotic mc i have ever read in my entire life and i read the trial read novels with every cycle for the first free chapters... the author tries to play it as if the mc is naive because he was working on a farm, but his idiocy reaches levels that this excuse can't justify, simple things like 5 min of research is something that he actively doesn't do, he actively digs himself holes and then he realises that he dug himself a hole so what does he do? he digs it even deeper, if you reach ch 48 you would know what i mean. fine, the dude hasn't ever read or watched any fantasy/ cultivation anything but do a slight bit of research, my dude, if that's something you got interested in the first instinct is to read up on it or watch things on the thing you are interested on to gain as much info as you can. going back to the author being a lier, in his comment he says that the mc is mostly ignorant for the most part for the first 10 chapters, but that's a lie, if anything as times go on it gets worst and worst as you can no longer excuse his ignorance.

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