Stopped after 10 chapters, way too much misplaced comedy and incoherences, that pulled me out of the story. There's only 1200 pioneers in the world which I assume has a 7 billion population which makes the chance of being one 1 out of 6 million and of course there's 4 of them being in the same school. It's also not explained why monsters would appear before the terraformation, whether they'd appear for everyone,... After getting these powers and the terraformation, you really get the feeling these guys are in a summer camp. Millions of people may die but all they think above is mocking each others and playing jokes. There's also the convenient fact that you have 2 sons of mma champions, a champion archer and a kid from an assassin family all in the same school... Too much for me to believe it'd be genuinely possible if such event were to be happening. It's a sloppy beginning.
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LIKEThis is a pretty bad take. Everything you said here could genuinely be established in reality. You ever talked to people that are of middle aged ex military? A lot of them have very crass jokes. It’s a psychological method of coping in times of great stress. Having a ton of ridiculously strong people makes sense if it’s the school of the special elite; especially after MMA became more popular in this world after mana started seeping in. Millions die, are you supposed to just lay in bed and cry? Maybe that is your perogative, it wouldn’t be everyone’s though.