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precious_pruddy
precious_pruddyLv23yr
2021-05-29 06:51

The story has a nice and captivating start. I felt the emotions of the characters were portrayed and described so well that I understood them. Kudos to the author for the amazing job. Keep it up.

Bewitching Illusions

Mary Algen Guiang
4.9
83 Chs

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Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv14

thank you soooo much for such a generous review! thank you for understanding the characters deeply, and for empathizing with each of them! I always am happy when I hear this. ♥♥♥😭😭😭😭 thank you for making my day awesome!

3yr
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Blessing_Ewetumo
Blessing_EwetumoLv3

Oh my goodness, I couldn't stop reading this book and was so crushed when I realized I've gotten to the end of the chapters. Please author, update some more. it would be a crime not to let people read more of your amazing story. I honestly can't wait to see who Yuki will end up with, and gosh what a tweaking plot twist at the fourth chapter. Kudos to the author, honestly👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😆

3yr

PhnxGold
PhnxGoldLv4

I have been on this platform for awhile and I read quite a number of books, but I have to say this is one of the most well written story I have come across. The character design and writing quality is superb, it reach directly into the readers heart ❤️. I am honored to have the opportunity of reading such an amazing piece of writing, it's both entertaining and inspiring. Thank you so much author sharing this lovely work with us 😍😍

3yr
Etherealthewriter
EtherealthewriterLv1

The talent you have is just unbelievable! Well done! This story is amazing and i cant wait to read more! Such an interesting story you really got my so caught up! Phenomenal jobbbbbb Mary! I highly recommend everyone reads this book.

3yr
_Kitto_
_Kitto_Lv3

Wow Author it's a dam good novel and the way you are narrating it it's dam intresting ..I m way very much interested into your novel . .Way to go ..keep up the good work ..

3yr
zushe_sensei
zushe_senseiLv2

Right from the start the story is hmm what should i say, BEWITCHING i loved it everything was soo good i am in love with characters, great work authour, add this to library!!

3yr
OEmilio
OEmilioLv10

As a fellow author I can say the following without Shred of pride in my heart. I am Proud of my chapter 1. It took me 7 days to write and perfect. That being said, Author-San’s chapter 1 is Just as good as mine. Not only is the story captivating but it is written in the natural style of the author. This enhances the reading experience because it flows better. Think dark chocolate and milk chocolate. One is bitter but good and the Other is good beginning to end. This is the comparison I will use for both Your books. The ideas and concepts are great in both but this being your natural style, its a smoother and more enjoyable read. Love the story on both so far and cant wait to keep reading. Keep up the amazing work please !!! (Im the jealous one of your talent)

3yr
Banaaminana
BanaaminanaLv1

And yet again here the author is, winning my heart! Honestly, I would be lying if I said that this is bad because it is amazing! The author is amazing with words! I recommend you read it!

3yr
phoenixhyperion
phoenixhyperionLv13

It took me like 10 minutes to start writing this review. My mind is still processing what I just read. I'm so engrossed in the story I forgot my frustrations and be hooked. Like literally. This is nice. A heart touching kind of nice. A mouth gaping kind of nice. A mind breaking kind of nice. I honestly feel the hailstorm of emotions of the characters. Sympathizing with them. Feeling terrible at their situations. Dang, dear author my heart is still in fragile state. Please stop hurting me >.<

3yr
temiyemi354
temiyemi354Lv2

This is a very beautiful and exciting story. it makes me want to keep reading to the last page without blinking. I am very much impressed by the expressed emotions and beautiful characters. thumbs up to the reader. we request for more beautiful stories like this.

3yr
Myst3ryqueentory
Myst3ryqueentoryLv1

The author's writing is unbelievably good. I almost found myself crying while reading chapter two big can't wait for more chapters to come. I highly recommend this book. Enjoy

3yr
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