Item: Bewitching Illusions
Rating: 5
Author: OEmilio

OEmilioLv103yr

2021-06-11 13:23

As a fellow author I can say the following without Shred of pride in my heart. I am Proud of my chapter 1. It took me 7 days to write and perfect. That being said, Author-San’s chapter 1 is Just as good as mine. Not only is the story captivating but it is written in the natural style of the author. This enhances the reading experience because it flows better. Think dark chocolate and milk chocolate. One is bitter but good and the Other is good beginning to end. This is the comparison I will use for both Your books. The ideas and concepts are great in both but this being your natural style, its a smoother and more enjoyable read. Love the story on both so far and cant wait to keep reading. Keep up the amazing work please !!! (Im the jealous one of your talent)

Bewitching Illusions

Mary Algen Guiang

4.9

83 Chs

Liked by 4 people

Replies4

Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv14

hahahaha! now, that is cheating! 💔💔💔 how can I continue to hate you if you just said something like this to me?! ♥♥♥ thank you so much for being honest with the review, I am so happy to find out how exactly you view my work. and yes, your review is going to be one of the most treasured, if not for anything else than for me being one of your fans. ♥♥♥

3yr

OEmilioLv10

Thank you so much and the same goes for your review as well. Consider me a fan of your work😊

3yr

Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv14

thank you 🥰🥰🥰! truly, I'm just speechless now! ♥♥♥

OEmilio:Thank you so much and the same goes for your review as well. Consider me a fan of your work😊

3yr

Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv14

To all my dear readers, I'm publishing the last chapter of the Cinderella book on my new novel "The Male Lead is Obsessed with Me (Book 2)" which is also a published work on Webnovel. It will have this title- Bewitching Illusions: The Witch's Fairytale (END). Please bear with me and go there, the chapter will be a FREE chapter. I wanted to add more chapters to the book but it seems I have faced too many technical issues with my current company that I have already lost all motivation to keep adding into my chapters. Hence, I will end the book with an overwhelming gratitude in my heart. Thank you for being with me on this amazing journey. Thank you for your reviews, comments, likes, and gifts. This is not how I wanted the book to end, and who knows if I decide to publish the continuation of the book with another company here on Webnovel, or use another platform to do the same. There are numerous possibilities, but for now, the only words on my lips are what I always love to repeat, arigato gozaimasu! Thank you for giving my book a chance! Thank you for giving a start-up writer like me a chance to write for you! I hope you can read my other books too here on Webnovel. And please don't hesitate to reach out to me if you have any queries about the stories. I always love talking to friends about my books and the characters I have learned to love. ♥

3yr

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Blessing_EwetumoLv3

Oh my goodness, I couldn't stop reading this book and was so crushed when I realized I've gotten to the end of the chapters. Please author, update some more. it would be a crime not to let people read more of your amazing story. I honestly can't wait to see who Yuki will end up with, and gosh what a tweaking plot twist at the fourth chapter. Kudos to the author, honestly👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😆

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PhnxGoldLv4

I have been on this platform for awhile and I read quite a number of books, but I have to say this is one of the most well written story I have come across. The character design and writing quality is superb, it reach directly into the readers heart ❤️. I am honored to have the opportunity of reading such an amazing piece of writing, it's both entertaining and inspiring. Thank you so much author sharing this lovely work with us 😍😍

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EtherealthewriterLv1

The talent you have is just unbelievable! Well done! This story is amazing and i cant wait to read more! Such an interesting story you really got my so caught up! Phenomenal jobbbbbb Mary! I highly recommend everyone reads this book.

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_Kitto_Lv3

Wow Author it's a dam good novel and the way you are narrating it it's dam intresting ..I m way very much interested into your novel . .Way to go ..keep up the good work ..

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zushe_senseiLv2

Right from the start the story is hmm what should i say, BEWITCHING i loved it everything was soo good i am in love with characters, great work authour, add this to library!!

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BanaaminanaLv1

And yet again here the author is, winning my heart! Honestly, I would be lying if I said that this is bad because it is amazing! The author is amazing with words! I recommend you read it!

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phoenixhyperionLv13

It took me like 10 minutes to start writing this review. My mind is still processing what I just read. I'm so engrossed in the story I forgot my frustrations and be hooked. Like literally. This is nice. A heart touching kind of nice. A mouth gaping kind of nice. A mind breaking kind of nice. I honestly feel the hailstorm of emotions of the characters. Sympathizing with them. Feeling terrible at their situations. Dang, dear author my heart is still in fragile state. Please stop hurting me >.<

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temiyemi354Lv2

This is a very beautiful and exciting story. it makes me want to keep reading to the last page without blinking. I am very much impressed by the expressed emotions and beautiful characters. thumbs up to the reader. we request for more beautiful stories like this.

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The author's writing is unbelievably good. I almost found myself crying while reading chapter two big can't wait for more chapters to come. I highly recommend this book. Enjoy

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