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KingCristo
KingCristoLv23yr
2021-07-14 09:46

Yah there's potential here, and you can tell it was definitely inspired by "mushoko tensei" which isn't a bad thing, that's how most stories are made. However I just can't, get with the pacing. It goes by 1 year, 2 year, "after three years of doing dah, dah, dah; I have yet to improve. Don't think it to be boring to explain what happens in those couple years. This builds the word around us and let's us get to know the characters struggle.

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Side note, the development in further chapters gets real good, so overall it balances out, take your time and chill with this piece, no regrets reading it so far.

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