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Sanshire
SanshireLv112yr
2022-05-06 03:15

(Disclaimer: i only read about 300 something chapters) this novel is meh. It was cool at the beginning, but then it went from a cold mc and his own personal power growth to just army building and nonsense harem most of the time. The power progression of the mc is also absolutely bonkers, he takes forever to make breakthroughs and the requirements to make them are outright ludicrous. what's the point of realms and orders if you can just skip them and kill beyond your order? at first it gave you quite the dopamine rush reading these type of david vs goliath encounters, but then you realize how dumb the power system is. also, never once cared for the whole succubus partner deal, so that was also one of the things that put me off.

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XIETIAN
XIETIANAuthor

Did you really read? I wonder where the harem is because in 700 chapters there is only one couple. Anyway, thanks for reading. Goodbye and good luck.

Sanshire
SanshireLv11

you're correct, i mentioned a harem when in fact there isn't one yet( or if there will be one i wouldn't know) what i meant to say was that the women surrounding the mc have all shown interest in him and might even harbor feelings for him which led me to believe that in the future they might hook up. in hindsight, i shouldn't have been so hasty to say so. i can't edit the review so i'll just leave this comment here.

XIETIAN:Did you really read? I wonder where the harem is because in 700 chapters there is only one couple. Anyway, thanks for reading. Goodbye and good luck.
XIETIAN
XIETIANAuthor

Of all the women presented, Lilith aside, only 2 showed interest in him. You clearly haven't read attentively. Anyway, whatever.

Sanshire:you're correct, i mentioned a harem when in fact there isn't one yet( or if there will be one i wouldn't know) what i meant to say was that the women surrounding the mc have all shown interest in him and might even harbor feelings for him which led me to believe that in the future they might hook up. in hindsight, i shouldn't have been so hasty to say so. i can't edit the review so i'll just leave this comment here.
Black_Domain
Black_DomainLv3

so, author he will have 3 wife's right? pls stop confusing, he is not accepting nor rejecting...

XIETIAN:Of all the women presented, Lilith aside, only 2 showed interest in him. You clearly haven't read attentively. Anyway, whatever.
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