I need to be honest here so... this is my review. Your writing quality surpasses many so no need to question. 5 stars. You're uploading frequently so 5 stars.(atleast until chap 5 latest chapter) I don't know about the future but I hope you don't drop like many other authors after chapter 10 lol. Character Design is abit tricky. Your mc is a boxer and a coach in his last life with a wife and some kids. when he reincarnated in Pokemon. How does he know who nurse joy is? I know who said nurse joy looks like a game character blah blah but like... can you describe it little bit more vivid? Also how MC said he will tell the parents later that he is a grown man inside their kid's body? Don't. Bad idea. Even if it's not me, when your fanfic becomes bigger and bigger more audience will be attracted and I doubt they'll be like "Yay mc is telling his past lives' memories to his parents. Such a new and refreshing logical idea, author san!". I didn't want to give it 3 stars. That's too harsh. But you're not getting 5 for this. SO 4 stars for character design. World background is not even needed. It's Pokemon world and since the fanfic is in the embryo stage, original background has not been established so Stars- N/A I look forward to seeing your success.
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Thanks for the review, for one the MC isn’t the coach he is just the illegal boxer. But you are right about how I didn’t explain about how MC knew about Pokemon enough, so I’ll probably go back and edit Chapter 5 to clear that up a little. Also, I don’t think I said MC would tell his parents about his past life. But if I did, you don’t need to worry because that definetly is not happening, 😈
Oh nevermind, I did say that he would explain it in the future. But keep reading and you will find that he wont be explaining it lol
it's good to know that... I'm going to start reading [img=recommend]
IQjfjwefn:Thanks for the review, for one the MC isn’t the coach he is just the illegal boxer. But you are right about how I didn’t explain about how MC knew about Pokemon enough, so I’ll probably go back and edit Chapter 5 to clear that up a little. Also, I don’t think I said MC would tell his parents about his past life. But if I did, you don’t need to worry because that definetly is not happening, 😈
I look forward to what's gonna happen next. I don't wanna pressure you but I wanna read more of your fanfic lol.
IQjfjwefn:Oh nevermind, I did say that he would explain it in the future. But keep reading and you will find that he wont be explaining it lol
