to translator: I hate when I am about to hug someone really sexy and my face hits the mirror. story: Our language is called the mother tongue because the father never gets a chance to Speak, that Is, very nice Character: When I joke they take it seriously. When I am serious they take as a joke.. updatig stability: I don't know! world background: What kind of place is this? It's beautiful: Pigeons fly, women fall from the sky! I'm moving here!

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

It seems like this novel is a romance/harem novel and the system is more of a side element than the focus. By chapter 6 there were 4 women that both described as unbelievably beautiful and were emotionally invested in the mc in some way. It also uses multiple perspectives and the focus on the mc’s actions and thoughts is a little low.

I’ll get straight to the point: Don’t waste your time. There are so many problems with this book. First, the quality control is terrible. There are repeated chapters and the chapters aren’t even the same. It seems like the author had multiple drafts of some of the chapters and posted all of them. There are also basic issues with grammar and spelling, though it’s not the worst I’ve seen on the app. Second, the system is ridiculous. The MC gets points for doing even the most basic things and the levels weren’t well thought out. He basically reaches advanced or master level after leveling once. And as I said before, he gets points for doing the most basic things, like mastering all his school subjects by flipping through books or just interacting with an A student. He also masters cooking just by chopping some vegetables, which is another ridiculous thing. After that happens, the rest of the chapters so far becomes about his cooking skills and the fruit juice he made based on one of the many recipes he got from the system after leveling up once. The author obviously doesn’t know anything about cooking or wine, yet more than half the chapters are about the MC’s cooking or the juice he made, which tastes like red wine. Also, if you have suffered or are suffering from an eating disorder, then definitely skip this, because the author introduces an anorexic character who’s “cured” thanks to the MC’s drink, and it’s very obvious that the author knows nothing about anorexia or eating disorders.

This is terrible. i had to stop after 5 chapters. everyone is very beautiful in this novel. Another thing is one chapter it said thay his parents are working very hard to Help pay the achool fees but the next it says they have been dead for a few years and his sister is paying. its too hard to read

The premise of the learning system isn’t exactly new, but it could have been interesting. Honestly though, these first 20 chapters are a nightmare. 1/3 to 1/2 chapters are repeated in the next chapter, there are also huge inconsistencies in the story, and there really isn’t any learning. He just gains complete knowledge as long as its a related subject. Disappointing.

Is this story made by a single author? It's more like there's a couple of authors here, taking turns doing each paragraph - with only the vaguest knowledge of what each other is doing. This means there's going to be a beauty introduced every chapter. The protagonist's parents are going to be alive the next, and supposed dead for 3 years the next chapter. Oh, his sibling also regularly changes gender and names. This batch of trial-read has been...utterly terrible.

honestly it's pretty terrible because the story background changes to much. for example in the 1 or 2 chapter the mc had parents but then in the next chapter the mc parent had died and suddenly had a sister. also I feel like it drags out a scene to long. but other than that it's a good concept just needs to go back to the drawing board .

Bro, how does Qidian do this. If you’re going to change the names of the characters atleast make it synonymous with the synopsis. When did the Kelvin in the synopsis become Jon in the actual book? Also, atleast try and be more creative with the westerbized names. There’s like a Jon in every book Qidian has tried to change.

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