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jonathanparish0
jonathanparish0Lv153yr
2021-07-23 15:13

It seems like this novel is a romance/harem novel and the system is more of a side element than the focus. By chapter 6 there were 4 women that both described as unbelievably beautiful and were emotionally invested in the mc in some way. It also uses multiple perspectives and the focus on the mc’s actions and thoughts is a little low.

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jonathanparish0
jonathanparish0Lv15

Also a side-note is that from the way it’s presented the first 20 chapters might only be one day of events in the story.

LaoTze
LaoTzeLv14

Thanks for the informative review.

Adolf
AdolfLv13

Thank you for helping me not read this

Natsu_dragneel_689
Natsu_dragneel_689Lv13

Also mc’s backgrounds seems a little messed up... first-second chapter said both parents had a job and paid for his tutors but the jobs werent great and they would b sad if he dropped out of hs because he worked hard but had bad learning talent or sheit then 5th chapter it said his parents died in a car accident a few years ago and his sister had to drop out of school and work as a waitress

Md_tamim_vai
Md_tamim_vaiLv1

hi

Md_tamim_vai
Md_tamim_vaiLv1

helle

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camon asan

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rachelesque
rachelesqueLv15

I’ll get straight to the point: Don’t waste your time. There are so many problems with this book. First, the quality control is terrible. There are repeated chapters and the chapters aren’t even the same. It seems like the author had multiple drafts of some of the chapters and posted all of them. There are also basic issues with grammar and spelling, though it’s not the worst I’ve seen on the app. Second, the system is ridiculous. The MC gets points for doing even the most basic things and the levels weren’t well thought out. He basically reaches advanced or master level after leveling once. And as I said before, he gets points for doing the most basic things, like mastering all his school subjects by flipping through books or just interacting with an A student. He also masters cooking just by chopping some vegetables, which is another ridiculous thing. After that happens, the rest of the chapters so far becomes about his cooking skills and the fruit juice he made based on one of the many recipes he got from the system after leveling up once. The author obviously doesn’t know anything about cooking or wine, yet more than half the chapters are about the MC’s cooking or the juice he made, which tastes like red wine. Also, if you have suffered or are suffering from an eating disorder, then definitely skip this, because the author introduces an anorexic character who’s “cured” thanks to the MC’s drink, and it’s very obvious that the author knows nothing about anorexia or eating disorders.

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