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Batman_Sucks_101
Batman_Sucks_101Lv123yr
2021-07-24 13:07

honestly it's pretty terrible because the story background changes to much. for example in the 1 or 2 chapter the mc had parents but then in the next chapter the mc parent had died and suddenly had a sister. also I feel like it drags out a scene to long. but other than that it's a good concept just needs to go back to the drawing board .

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rachelesqueLv15

I’ll get straight to the point: Don’t waste your time. There are so many problems with this book. First, the quality control is terrible. There are repeated chapters and the chapters aren’t even the same. It seems like the author had multiple drafts of some of the chapters and posted all of them. There are also basic issues with grammar and spelling, though it’s not the worst I’ve seen on the app. Second, the system is ridiculous. The MC gets points for doing even the most basic things and the levels weren’t well thought out. He basically reaches advanced or master level after leveling once. And as I said before, he gets points for doing the most basic things, like mastering all his school subjects by flipping through books or just interacting with an A student. He also masters cooking just by chopping some vegetables, which is another ridiculous thing. After that happens, the rest of the chapters so far becomes about his cooking skills and the fruit juice he made based on one of the many recipes he got from the system after leveling up once. The author obviously doesn’t know anything about cooking or wine, yet more than half the chapters are about the MC’s cooking or the juice he made, which tastes like red wine. Also, if you have suffered or are suffering from an eating disorder, then definitely skip this, because the author introduces an anorexic character who’s “cured” thanks to the MC’s drink, and it’s very obvious that the author knows nothing about anorexia or eating disorders.

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