Most accurrate evaluation . I was unable to continue due to the bad writting and the lack of " immersion " . I felt like I was reading a coment of someone bored. I don't feel the sensation of seing it happen in front of me . Maybe other people might like it but I cannot continue.
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Hold up you think my writing is bad have you seen most of the fics on this site, and the reason why the grammar is bad is because I simply do not have the time to edit.
And I mean the lack of immersion may be explained in one or two chapters because I was not in the mood because of some people but I still think it's a pretty good quality story. But seriously have you seen almost every fanfic on this site you usually can't get too much better than the quality of my fic tbh
Just Improve imo....
deadly_orange:And I mean the lack of immersion may be explained in one or two chapters because I was not in the mood because of some people but I still think it's a pretty good quality story. But seriously have you seen almost every fanfic on this site you usually can't get too much better than the quality of my fic tbh
Well it's because I wrote those chapters when I was tired wasn't trying to make it that immersive and in have improved lol. my many fanfics are proof
SuicidalRussian:Just Improve imo....
... ok...
deadly_orange:Well it's because I wrote those chapters when I was tired wasn't trying to make it that immersive and in have improved lol. my many fanfics are proof
Umm what's with the dots lol
SuicidalRussian:... ok...
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deadly_orange:Umm what's with the dots lol
Thanks for the useless dots
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