Item: The Second Son Of Omniman
Rating: 5
Author: DaoistKboxkK

DaoistKboxkKLv13yr

2021-07-10 18:03

I appreciate your hard work that you are doing to produce a novel that we declare that we love, despite some of the critics who do not concern you with them. Do your work and I advised you to focus on two novels and add a lot of incidents instead of rushing and delving into one chapter by making it rich in words with me following from (Morocco).

The Second Son Of Omniman

deadly_orange

4.2

8 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies4

deadly_orangeAuthor

Thanks I appreciate and I would focus on two novels if their wasn't a lack of decent writers sadly I have to write alot but I enjoy it and I will continue putting in alot of work for each story and try to write interesting a at least decent quality stories and I will of course listen to criticism and try to fix them. I appreciate your support and concerns but I have lots to write now and that is fine. Well time to get to work after some housework

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DaoistKboxkKLv1

هل ستكمل رواية

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DaoistKboxkKLv1

Are you going to complete a novel?

3yr

DaoistKboxkKLv1

Are you going to add a new chapter?

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