Review Detail of Nar_cisse in Percy Jackson: Human Gamer

After 15 chapters : - The story is too fast paced, there is no development of relationships with percy or (SPOIL: Magnus) and they are briefly mentionned - The dungeons on which the MC goes are brushed over, we see absolutely nothing - The qualité of writing show that even if it's not poorly written, the author does not read his story before posting. So, in summary : The idea is interesting but the way it was executed does not serve justice to what - I think - the author truly wanted at the beginning. - The MC gains levels way too fast