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Great story. Good description, easy read, solid world-building, and better description than most Webnovel stories. Very well done, but I feel this one is just short of 5 stars. Why? I think it needs a little more of two things. Tension and dialogue. Tension doesn't mean people have to die or get hurt. Not necessarily. Maybe people have intense arguments. Perhaps a storm happen. Perhaps it's created by how you write the story. Maybe it's romantic tension. But I need to feel something just a little more, gripping. I'd also like to see a bit more dialogue here to make the characters feel a bit more real. To make it feel like I know them a little better. Some chapters seem to have a lapse in dialogue.