thanks for your review, this is my first novel and the first few haven't been edited yet. But I can guarantee that the latter chapters do pick up dramatically and they are not at all far away from the first few chapters. Happy reading!

This story is littt. And daring too, like omg. And enticing. you can tell that the characters are well rounded from the first few pages. it's very hooking, and honestly, the author did a good job. Congrats

Awesome!!! this was pretty great, I must be lucky today as this is the second book I can honestly say I'm gonna be reading. but I must warn the author, I have a fragile heart so you better update quicker! no offense though but still. Awesome work, honestly. congrats to the author

Dark humor

Lool, dirty snitch indeed

I think this is the first novel I am giving a five-star. IT WAS THAT GOOOD. I really really enjoyed it, like I had to stop myself from reading like honestly, no cap here. it was pretty good and I'm gonna be reading this in my spare time. please update more, your writing is great. I really love this book. kudos to the author

This story is awesome, it kicks off into action from the first few pages. I felt pretty scared at chapter two when the larva almost reached the child, the author really had my heart there. I think the author really did a good job, considering English is not his first language. you can totally resonate with the story. Congrats!

this is epic!

this is...*sighs, puts hands on chest* my best kind of story. you can feel the heroicness (s'cuz my English) vibrating out of the pages! and the mix of guardians is soo good. i didn't expect that, it was pretty a great idea. overall, awesome work. kudos to the author

Awweesssooomme! It's like an awesome movie and I was already anticipating the mc's rise to power from the first chapter! I can't wait to see how this turns out. Real great book, Kudos to the author!

less gooo

*scoffs in Spanish*

hmm..mystical

This book is great. the synopsis drew me in completely and it can only be done by a skilled writer. honestly speaking. I like the book and I'd want to see where the story leads. kudos to the author

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thanks

This book is a gem! like I'm reading a real novel! no offense tho to webnovel. The Mc not having a system in a world of system is a definite hook, I can't wait to see what'll happen in later chaps. Please update more?

getting interesting already 🙃🙃

this is a nice intro

Lolz I know ryt!