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Great_Young_Master
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2021-06-15 13:08

The story was doing great till the "system" came. Now, the MC gets summons, etc. The MC at the beginning was doing great with the powers he has from his bloodline but when the "system" came it pretty much slaps us in the face.... When the "system" came a bunch of info dumps came and made the story horrible.

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Randomguyno1
Randomguyno1Lv6

Thanks for saving my time.

Fangrove
FangroveAuthor

System? There is no system. That is his Identification. Not system. It was not his power, it did not give him power. It only shows how many points he can spend, who is he, and who is his patron.

Great_Young_Master
Great_Young_MasterLv11

I put "system" because I was too lazy and tired to come up with the actual name. I also didn't talked about whether it made him powerful or not. I only talked about that it made the story worse with the info dumps.

Fangrove:System? There is no system. That is his Identification. Not system. It was not his power, it did not give him power. It only shows how many points he can spend, who is he, and who is his patron.
Fangrove
FangroveAuthor

What info dump? Can you please tell me? I only put that so-called system to tell the reader his point. Nothing else. How is that info dump?

Great_Young_Master:I put "system" because I was too lazy and tired to come up with the actual name. I also didn't talked about whether it made him powerful or not. I only talked about that it made the story worse with the info dumps.
From_
From_Lv2

I think what they're actually talking about is that the story isn't what it used to be compared when it didn't have the identification or whatever. I mean why would the MC needs a waifu from another world like Hermione (if I'm reading this correctly the MC summons her.) when there's lots of pretty girls in DxD? The story was actually doing great when it didn't have the "identification." Maybe, when more people reads your fanfic they'll understand where we're coming from?

Fangrove:What info dump? Can you please tell me? I only put that so-called system to tell the reader his point. Nothing else. How is that info dump?
Fangrove
FangroveAuthor

Then there is nothing to do with the system no? If he bothers reading the summary he will know that this is Waifu Catalog fanfic.

From_:I think what they're actually talking about is that the story isn't what it used to be compared when it didn't have the identification or whatever. I mean why would the MC needs a waifu from another world like Hermione (if I'm reading this correctly the MC summons her.) when there's lots of pretty girls in DxD? The story was actually doing great when it didn't have the "identification." Maybe, when more people reads your fanfic they'll understand where we're coming from?
Great_Young_Master
Great_Young_MasterLv11

I've never heard of Waifu Catalog fanfic before. Also, I could be wrong but at that time I didn't see the Waifu Catalog Fanfic.

Fangrove:Then there is nothing to do with the system no? If he bothers reading the summary he will know that this is Waifu Catalog fanfic.
Bondrewde
BondrewdeLv4

Basically it's a genre of fanfic usually found on Questionable Questing. The MC has a set amount of points to spend and can buy abilities for himself or waifus to help aid him in his mission (This is a pretty basic explanation and there's a bit more to it than what I described)

Great_Young_Master:I've never heard of Waifu Catalog fanfic before. Also, I could be wrong but at that time I didn't see the Waifu Catalog Fanfic.
Dicky_Ratico
Dicky_RaticoLv4

yeah, I like the summary & early chapters. I agree that's the story when system/identification/whatever it called make me so less interested. without the system, in oc dxd itself many loopholes can be explored.

Great_Young_Master:I put "system" because I was too lazy and tired to come up with the actual name. I also didn't talked about whether it made him powerful or not. I only talked about that it made the story worse with the info dumps.
rodrigo_melo
rodrigo_meloLv2

I think their issue is that the ''System'' is just lazy writing, which it is. The ''System'' is just a lazy way to explain things so you don't have to bother creating a way for the MC know by himself.

Fangrove:Then there is nothing to do with the system no? If he bothers reading the summary he will know that this is Waifu Catalog fanfic.
Great_Young_Master
Great_Young_MasterLv11

Well, looks like tons of people agrees with me...😂😂

Fangrove:Then there is nothing to do with the system no? If he bothers reading the summary he will know that this is Waifu Catalog fanfic.
Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaLv12

yikes... dodge a bullet there...

Queen_Karina
Queen_KarinaLv14

The mc gets nerfed and he wasn’t even the strongest in his peerage before the nerf. He also added shirou from fate and shirous harem to his peerage and shiro is way stronger than mc

Herohero
HeroheroLv4

D**mn the author destroyed a fanfic that had great potential with a few chapters

Queen_Karina:The mc gets nerfed and he wasn’t even the strongest in his peerage before the nerf. He also added shirou from fate and shirous harem to his peerage and shiro is way stronger than mc
BukanOrang
BukanOrangLv14

yeah, what a mess

Eins_Mensch
Eins_MenschLv14

i barely read through the first chp and already wanted to quit, the things he did with 3 are already ridiculous aswell as the questions he asks... no normal child would be like that nor have the knowledge to begin with

Isak_Svartrapmo
Isak_SvartrapmoLv4

will you update this ff again?

Fangrove:Then there is nothing to do with the system no? If he bothers reading the summary he will know that this is Waifu Catalog fanfic.
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