The story was doing great till the "system" came. Now, the MC gets summons, etc. The MC at the beginning was doing great with the powers he has from his bloodline but when the "system" came it pretty much slaps us in the face.... When the "system" came a bunch of info dumps came and made the story horrible.

I haven’t read it yet, but I love the idea of being reborn as Raiser

I would have preferred it if the story stayed focused on dxd. Otherwise, i do like that Riser is training and taking it seriously. .

Like the premise but the entire thing with his powers not from DxD is not to my taste.. Would've preferred just focusing on the DxD world, no slutlife inc, no other worlds etc. but that's just my opinion. The grammar is good and story is readable. I'm dropping it but good luck author.

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This story started of great, but like many of the other reviews, as soon as it gets to the fate arc and shirou is introduced it goes downhill. The author puts extreme focus on shirou, having the mc add him to his peerage along with shirous harem. it keeps going even after the fate arc and into the mcs world where even the gods and higher beings get interested in shirou. The mc during this time doesn’t even get any power ups or anything all he does is spit his phoenix flames and that’ all It’ just frustrating

This is a nice fanfic where SI Riser is not only actually taking things seriously but also the CYOA adds a certain uniqueness to the story. Hope you continue and keep up the good work.

I was left very disappointed. I read up to ch 10 before I had to stop. The writing was lazy with slutlife Inc and some chapters were just copy pastes of other authors works. Rather than make MC stronger on their own, the beta gets a "System" to getting stronger faster. It cheapened the story and the dialog 6was so bad I couldn't stand it.

writing- It has its flaws but still readable if you're patient, recommend grammarly. S. development- Decent, but nothing exceptional and anything new. It is predictable and generalised. Character- A bit bland for the Mc and the side characters, predictable and forgettable to put it bluntly. also why are they easily indoctrinated with little to no resistance? for the 'plot'? update- Not sure. perhaps decent I guess. World - It's DXD, but it lacks the exposure of cultures, society, and etc.