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Atlas_Evergreen
Atlas_EvergreenLv32yr
2022-05-30 13:53

It started off really good! Until the Author started writing about the MC having kids at 12. Then controlling is nut to only have girls. Then talking about marrying his kid in the future. His own daughter.... Really weird group of people that like this. Author literally said in the comments its good to keep it in the Family.... Kreep

In Naruto with Slightly Perverted System

SupremeCookie
4.8
151 Chs

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SupremeCookie
SupremeCookieAuthor

thanks for the review, but all of us are just joking around about the keeping it in the family thing. I'm ending this fanfic right after the war and some stuff. There will be no marrying his daughters and stuff.

2yr
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CkLance
CkLanceLv15

It sounds like you aren’t smart of enough to realize most of the novel has been jokes & memez.

2yr
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Atlas_Evergreen
Atlas_EvergreenLv3

It Indeed was mostly joking lance, but I have to tell you joking about something like that is extremely unsettling and if you find nothing wrong with it, you need to seek help. IDK maybe joking about impregnating you Child is wrong. The community on this site is extremely weird.

CkLance:It sounds like you aren’t smart of enough to realize most of the novel has been jokes & memez.
2yr
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CkLance
CkLanceLv15

There were no jokes about impregnating his children. Akihiko has never been anything but wholesome to his daughters. Seems you're the one projecting guy.

Atlas_Evergreen:It Indeed was mostly joking lance, but I have to tell you joking about something like that is extremely unsettling and if you find nothing wrong with it, you need to seek help. IDK maybe joking about impregnating you Child is wrong. The community on this site is extremely weird.
2yr
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Atlas_Evergreen
Atlas_EvergreenLv3

Hmmm maybe you should go and look at the very beginning of the chapters where the author describes the appearances of little girls maybe then you will see it? Then again you probably would just ignore it and keep reading like everything is fine. lol I'm not going to argue with you anymore. You like weird stuff like this, that's okay. I didn't mean to hurt your feelings lol.

CkLance:There were no jokes about impregnating his children. Akihiko has never been anything but wholesome to his daughters. Seems you're the one projecting guy.
2yr
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CkLance
CkLanceLv15

The author described them like the literal characters they're based off of. lol You having an opinion on something is whatever, but don't make false claims about things that didn't happen.

Atlas_Evergreen:Hmmm maybe you should go and look at the very beginning of the chapters where the author describes the appearances of little girls maybe then you will see it? Then again you probably would just ignore it and keep reading like everything is fine. lol I'm not going to argue with you anymore. You like weird stuff like this, that's okay. I didn't mean to hurt your feelings lol.
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