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2021-05-04 16:13

Alright, alright. It's me. Couldn't resist. Anyway, please let me know what you guys think! Positive, negative, any and all feedback is welcome.

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_Dj
_DjLv5

So far you seem to have thought out the whole thing what confuse me is that who descendants are the new character from. the rest is pretty well written from what i read

Protagonist_M
Protagonist_MAuthor

Thanks for reading and reaching out! Which part of the story are you at, and which characters would you be referring to? The Ten Pillars are not descendants, they are characters from the original timeline that have obtained immortality The minor characters like the guards and the researchers are not descendants of anyone.

_Dj:So far you seem to have thought out the whole thing what confuse me is that who descendants are the new character from. the rest is pretty well written from what i read
_Dj
_DjLv5

Like ten aliases such as the leviathan being zaryusu but it is more like a puzzel in figuring out the identity of them like warlock being fluder mostly trying tk figure out who they are

Protagonist_M:Thanks for reading and reaching out! Which part of the story are you at, and which characters would you be referring to? The Ten Pillars are not descendants, they are characters from the original timeline that have obtained immortality The minor characters like the guards and the researchers are not descendants of anyone.
_Dj
_DjLv5

Confused with the OCs but that is mostly on me

_Dj:Like ten aliases such as the leviathan being zaryusu but it is more like a puzzel in figuring out the identity of them like warlock being fluder mostly trying tk figure out who they are
Protagonist_M
Protagonist_MAuthor

Oh, don't worry. It's not your fault, the mysteries are supposed to be mysterious :P. Everything will reveal itself in time.

_Dj:Confused with the OCs but that is mostly on me
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