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Devilkin
DevilkinLv143yr
2021-05-28 11:41

Only 17 chapters so far but what an incredibly well-crafted piece of work. Truly some of the best fan-fiction I've read, the reveal of the state of the world up to this point is gripping and I cant wait to see wat Ainz does when he gets here.

Overlord: Supremacy of the Fallen

Protagonist_M
4.9
28 Chs

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Mel_Aniv
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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! Stunning writing quality! Character development and more! ADVICE None, the author is a better writer compared to me. Kudos!

3yr

Protagonist_M
Protagonist_MAuthor

Alright, alright. It's me. Couldn't resist. Anyway, please let me know what you guys think! Positive, negative, any and all feedback is welcome.

3yr
Janemba_The_Demon
Janemba_The_DemonLv13

Look man I'm usually not the type to enjoy story's that take place outside the OG timeline and all but by GOD THIS STORY IS A GLORIOUS MASTERPIECE. The build up I'm feeling is immeasurable please oh god please don't drop the ball when Ainz gets back. I'm hoping for a guardians collection mini-arc soooooo much.

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ashmirfahwat
ashmirfahwatLv1

Pleeeeeaaase don't abandon this. I actually regret reading this because now I'm just left with this insatiable craving for more. Like seriously, this should be a mandatory read for anyone who enjoys the Light Novel. TBH, I wouldn't mind having this as the canon sequel. Heck, Maruyama should just use your story as a blueprint for what to write next!

3yr
Zarosian
ZarosianLv14

Reveal spoiler

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Maryixxx
MaryixxxLv4

Wow! I once read this type of story but dropped it because it was not my cup of tea. However, this book is something different that made me stay and read more chapters. Job well done, and I'm excited to read what will happen next.

3yr
Bunny_Junnie
Bunny_JunnieLv4

You are such a talented author! I really lost in your book! It is a different kind of story and I liked it. Synopsis is interesting and you defined your plot very well. Anyone will lost in your book so I wants warn the readers before take a look at it. Keep it up author! I cheer you!

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Easy_Tiger
Easy_TigerLv1

Not being at all familiar with the source material of this story, I went into this with a completely clean slate and judged it on its own merits. And I have to say, this is a truly epic and well-written piece of fiction that I could definitely see as a published novel. The fictional world the author conveys here is vast and full of history, a great deal of which is skillfully told to the reader in the form of a teacher addressing a classroom scene early in the book. The history and the world itself is interesting enough to take up a whole story on its own, but there is intriguing plot at play here too with the return of an old evil force. The cast of characters is diverse and all are portrayed really well, making this work feel all the more authentic and substantial. The prose all flows smoothly and is written at a very high level, making this a must read! Really enjoyed the opening few chapters. I look forward to reading on further!

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ZoneTail
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▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆

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