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HotIce
HotIceAuthor3yr
2021-05-02 00:01

Hello, a few words from the author This is a slow-paced story, please be patient with :) and this is a rework of my second novel Tribe Online. since this is a game novel, I will try to balance 40% time within the game, 40% time about his real life, and the remaining 20% is about competitive scene, e-sport, and others. I will try to balance it like this. Criticisms are welcomed, but sometimes (or maybe most of the time) people think that sh*t-talking is being "harsh" to critic the author while actually, it's not a criticism, you are being rude. I will delete such a review if there's one. thanks and hope you enjoy the story.

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HotIce
4.3
198 Chs

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HotIce
HotIceAuthor

also, check the tag for more information about the story

3yr
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Hobo_Hank
Hobo_HankLv14

Hey, I just thought I should let you know there's a grammar mistake in your synopsis! "Adventure" should be "Adventurer", Because you are referring to someone who would be going on an adventure. Feel free to delete this comment after you see it! I hope to see more chapters soon!

3yr
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HotIce
HotIceAuthor

thanks, I will edit it immediately.

Hobo_Hank:Hey, I just thought I should let you know there's a grammar mistake in your synopsis! "Adventure" should be "Adventurer", Because you are referring to someone who would be going on an adventure. Feel free to delete this comment after you see it! I hope to see more chapters soon!
3yr
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Nik_16
Nik_16Lv2

though im a fan of other 2 novels, i dont like the genre of this novel.... also the information which the synopsis gave..... i have given up on such stories....though i wish all the best to author

3yr
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HotIce
HotIceAuthor

it's okay, just a matter of preference

Nik_16:though im a fan of other 2 novels, i dont like the genre of this novel.... also the information which the synopsis gave..... i have given up on such stories....though i wish all the best to author
3yr
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IncubusImmortal
IncubusImmortalLv14

Harem?

3yr
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HotIce
HotIceAuthor

nope, I feel unrealistic to put a harem in a modern society so it's one on one romance.

IncubusImmortal:Harem?
3yr
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Pandoras_Keeper
Pandoras_KeeperLv14

How different will the rework be? Is it recommended to read the former version (eg. for more information) or will there be massive changes?

3yr
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HotIce
HotIceAuthor

you don't have to, the original one only has a few chapters in. like seven chapters. it does not matter whether you read it or not. you will only suffer if you read the first version since it's one of my early novels too, the grammar sucks.

Pandoras_Keeper:How different will the rework be? Is it recommended to read the former version (eg. for more information) or will there be massive changes?
3yr
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tEkNiQ
tEkNiQLv11

Hopefully it's similar to the World Online Novel, Looking forward to reading it :)

3yr
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ThisUnknownBoi
ThisUnknownBoiLv1

The story itself is interesting but the constant grammar problems is kinda deterring me

3yr
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Riritsut_Kanarai
Riritsut_KanaraiLv3

I like the book 😍

3yr
Aeser
AeserLv5

Kingdom building? it sounds like it but there's no tag

HotIce:also, check the tag for more information about the story
3yr
PonjuPonju
PonjuPonjuLv4

I keep trying to read this book, but every time I run into the Runner aspect or the eSports stuff, I have to put it back down. Having been through a similar episode as the MC with getting my leg smashed, it makes reading sport type novels a major turn-off. But one day I'll get past the first chapter!!! One day!! ...just not today...

3yr
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Koke112
Koke112Lv2

Hi Author, Is it possible to know when the mc start his Romance like 100s or 200s or will it be a very slow romance ?

3yr
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Lazy_Stellar
Lazy_StellarLv4

Hi author. I am just here to sincerely ask (rant/complain) 2 things. First, can you PLEASE UPDATE MORE. Once a week is toooooooo slow. If you uploaded like, once a day, you would have been in like, top 5 with the potential of the novel. Maybe even more. YOu would have gained sooo much mooore money. Second, can you please make it 40% game, 40% pro and 20% rl? Or 50% g, 30%p, and 20% rl? I know what you are envisioning and I support it. It's nice, really. Not a bad idea at all! But, it just feels like a waste reading 3 chapters of strolling around aquarium with kids (I like them, really. Just, don't focus the novel on them) when we could have had 3 chapters of a tournament instead. Sincerely, thank you.

2yr
xynex
xynexLv1

Author why do you only have 28 reviews even though you have 1.2 million views?

2yr
Anarook_tylde
Anarook_tyldeLv13

why doesn't this get updated any more? have you dropped it

2yr
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Is this dropped

HotIce:thanks, I will edit it immediately.
1yr
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James_Bilyou
James_BilyouLv15

Hotice do you have any more chapters finished. Was truly enjoying the book. Hope it wasn't canceled.

1yr
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Sonkei
SonkeiLv5

Reveal spoiler

3yr

Zabne123
Zabne123Lv15

Read to chapter 32 and just couldn't do it anymore. The mc is getting nowhere. I understand there are troubles in his life but it feels like he doesn't have enough based off how you make the mc out to be. He is just too casual and laid back but has big dreams with too many set backs. By chapter 32 he should be somewhere especially with his fateful encounter. I feel you just made it too hard and too ridiculous for a beginning story.

3yr
Eleventh_Realm
Eleventh_RealmLv2

i haven't read the book yet but ill give it 5 star hoping it will be good as armipotent also looking forward later ill change my review if good or not.

3yr
UnedeadKing23
UnedeadKing23Lv14

The story is written well everything is good however you should really change the name should be about a man trying to run at No Kingdom building it takes too long to get into I was really hoping for a king the building

3yr
wahab
wahabLv15

I read to chapter 20 and couldn't continue. I am sorry but the story is boring. The writing quality is good however the story isn't engaging

3yr
Prothanis
ProthanisLv15

Won’t lie, the start was a little rough to read (a little boring and slow), but after chapter 45 it really does start to pick up. If you can read through the first 45, you will start enjoying this read

3yr
Drew_Paroz
Drew_ParozLv2

Overall, I like the structure of this story and I think it has potential, but I am disappointed with the slower pace. Maybe the novel will pick up the pace once a "Tribe" is formed between the various characters. Author definitely seems like they have a direction and the main cast all have some personality instead of one dimensional characteristics. Good: -game seems interesting -blend of real world and video game which gives life to characters and makes the world seem more real -No line up of jade beauties trying to get into MC's pants just cause he has a pulse [as of latest chapter, 86] -MC is not a money obsessed like a lot of video game genre MCs on this site Bad: -I am current through chapter 86 and there has been no kingdom building, no romance, and no e-sports. The novel is interesting though it seems more like a cultivation novel where almost all of the focus is on the main character being a "trash" with a cute little sister type character doing a VERY long training montage with stat increases instead of changes in realms. -way too much early focus on press conferences and other news segments that have little story relevance [at least as of chapter 86] -characters responding to the smallest conflict between each other as "do they hate me?" if you have been friends and close for over a decade and the one little thing makes you think that they hate you, that is just rough. -There are some grammar errors though nothing that makes it impossible to understand what is going on in the story.

3yr
LoneBee
LoneBeeLv10

i would definitely recommend, but that is just because i really enjoy gaming novels, but the story is nice, mc doesn’t feel op or something and there is already some character development. if you’re not sure if you want to read it just read a couple of chapter and decide if it’s worth it after :)

3yr
JACRAC1
JACRAC1Lv13

So far it's a good read, at 54 chapters and its still interesting. Worth trying out................. .............. .......

3yr
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