Please translate the name in the English version. Impossible to know which character speaks or acts. Otherwise fanfic has good potential. (English is not my language, I use webnovel to improve myself)

Really good story, even though its a translation. Nice update stability too, but I'd probably like it better if you were to sacrifice Update stability on the grammer. When I read it I had no idea what was going on with the grammer, but I can tell it was a interesting plot. Can you please put some time in the translating?

I got no idea what's going on. It says it's a translation but it makes little to no sense. Is this a Google translate, translation? It also sounds irritatingly wuxia protagonist like, especially with the so called golden finger.... Or should I say... Fingers... It completely ignores the potential sakura has of het oplossen n already by the nature of said golden finger when the only reason she was useless in Canon was due to her attitude. That said the writing quality is bad enough that I don't have much of a clue what is going on before the scene is over and a nw chapter with a brand new puzzle occurs.

No sé sabe quién es quien deberías usar los nombre de la versión en inglés la idea es buena pero la mala traducción mata el sentimiento en la lectura

Writing Quality 1 Stability of Updates 5 Story Development 5 Character Design 5 World Background 4 The story is interesting but the quality of the writing will make it difficult to read

I haven't read this yet, I just want to leave thus here.

I feel like I'm solving a puzzle I really hard to understand what they saying I mean the idea is good but the writing quality is just really hard to understand