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FNU_LNU
FNU_LNULv43yr
2021-08-24 05:03

This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity. And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.

Starting in an Online Game With 3000 Death Soldiers

Zhang Cai Tian Xia
4.2
40 Chs

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bananaman
bananamanLv3

Makes lots of sense considering the mc has generic name

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Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv5

Well I mean in this novel only the name is westernized, the novel was gutted for copy right reasons not due to westernization so your comments on the wrong novel 😋

3yr
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FNU_LNU
FNU_LNULv4

this is generic review for all westernized novels. and if you read this review you would see that i said at best only names are westernized and at worst it is gutted and rewritten. i dont compare all novels with raws cause it takes too much time, but i did some and lot of them are really changed compared to raws. that is why i am confident that any westernized novel deserves auto 1 star. simply it is really bad practice.

Omnidoa:Well I mean in this novel only the name is westernized, the novel was gutted for copy right reasons not due to westernization so your comments on the wrong novel 😋
3yr
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Tobi_Uchiha_2556
Tobi_Uchiha_2556Lv2

bruh i am seeing this comment in almost every novel reviews i have seen lol

3yr
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FNU_LNU
FNU_LNULv4

well too many sh*tty novels... i only dont put this review in novels with MC that has chinese name. and sadly some of them may be rewrites also..

Tobi_Uchiha_2556:bruh i am seeing this comment in almost every novel reviews i have seen lol
3yr
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deletedaccount_
deletedaccount_Lv1

try reading Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed.

FNU_LNU:well too many sh*tty novels... i only dont put this review in novels with MC that has chinese name. and sadly some of them may be rewrites also..
3yr
SummerVoidFish
SummerVoidFishLv3

learn to read

Omnidoa:Well I mean in this novel only the name is westernized, the novel was gutted for copy right reasons not due to westernization so your comments on the wrong novel 😋
3yr
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Omnidoa
OmnidoaLv5

learn to f off

SummerVoidFish:learn to read
3yr
SummerVoidFish
SummerVoidFishLv3

idiot

Omnidoa:learn to f off
3yr
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Webnovel_Bot69
Webnovel_Bot69Lv1

This is not my problem!!! my problem is when i was in school i supported the debate "Education is more important than money". Dear money, I am sorry please forgive me, I was just small kid

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TheDolphin
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This guy must really hate the other protagonist who can also summon 3000 angels to fight for him

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Alex_Guetta
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It don’t deserve 5 stars but it’s the best story of this week so be it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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What can I say, anyone who plays a game broken like that probably have some mental issues. Znsjshhsbahdshajjsnahshshshshshshsbssbsbdbshdhd

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SealDeity
SealDeityLv2

The concept is ok, and the world background is cliche. MC unlocks the soldiers, but apart from the beginning dungeon doesn't use them. The character design is 2-D and the concept of unlocking talents is stupid. the only good thing about this novel is the above mediocre translation quality. The only thing I recommend is not reading this book.

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Peternity
PeternityLv13

this was the 2nd most popular in the vote pool, then removed, while a bunch of others got released, and to make it even ore insane the no1 voted novel (my maids are all antagonistic) still there. is the voting exist for spitting in our face?!

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kewllewk
kewllewkLv11

It's actually relatively good, as trial reads go. Be warned however: large portions of this novel will be nonsensical or unsuited to other parts of the novel. Examples include the nonsense that is his only attack skill, the fact that literally nothing he does costs any resource, his obsession with equipment over skills, the general lack of sense with stats, and the entire setup surrounding those stupid "death soldiers". This is not the author's fault, but rather the fault of the transcriber, who has changed major portions of this story and added random stuff in to pad out the differences in order to avoid copyright infringement while copy pasting almost literally everything else without regard to whether it makes sense to leave it that way. In the original story the MC actually does have an SSS talent which removes resource costs, is a mage who can fuse skills together, and doesn't even posess a system at all much less a horde of soldiers to murder his enemies for him. A lot of scenes will make much more sense if you keep in mind that the original author didn't have him as an invincible tank with an army.

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diogofreire
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Sinon21
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Why its novel out from vote pool ?

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