1. this book is murdering the english language 2. interesting characters at first, but no development 3. we are just dropped into a world, there's no information 4. the story is not bad conclusion: it is readable and zan be a good book, if you have free time and nothing to read, but to absolutely say that you have to read this book I wouldn't go that far.
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well thanks, really appreciated it, at least you stopped and read it,
but think again, it's not really that bad isn't it? it's cute, just open your heart and positive, life is beautiful, hahahaha so how many chapters have you read it this far? I'll fix my English for you, love ya! ^^
I have read 27 chapters now, i did not say that the tale was not cute or anything, but the grammar was really bad in some places (it is still understandable, but can be very annoying, and some people can learn bad things from it). It is in a way enjoyable, and as I wrote previously it is not bad, but there is place for improvement.
you right it still need lots to be improve here, as I said I translate this and some might missed and it's became so unreadable, will have my time to edit it, hopefully it's getting better, thanks for reading to 27 ^^
I continue reading this book, it's like you find a good tv show that you watch 1-2 episode a day, but you do not have the urge to watch the next and the next episode each time you finish one until you realize that it is 2 am and you have to get up to work at 6 am.
+ Good work and thank you for the time you put in to it. I am happy to meat an author/translater that takes the time to go trough the comments and reviews and respond to them, I hope you continue and did not take it in a bad way what I wrote.
I know what you mean, so I'll try my best to make it readable for everyone, really nice to have your honest comment, have a nice day ^^
