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2021-05-04 10:17

This story reminds me of a manga about a man replaced his sister to marry a king. I enjoy the plot so far, but maybe you can learn how to write it in more neat and clean style so the reader can enjoy it more πŸ˜‰ Are you, by any chance, from Indonesia?

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Sweet_SourKiwi
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Yes, it is! it's inspired by Mahwa Prime Minister in Disguise, I'm learning, too much to learn, as fact writing in English is not as easy as talking, thanks for stopping by, yes Aku orang Indonesia ^^

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26starsLv12

Aw... Prime Minister in Disguise is my favorite! But I haven't read the season 2. Anyway, salam kenal. Aku juga orang Indonesia dan masih baru di sini 😊

Sweet_SourKiwi
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Thanks yah dah mampir, butuh banyak belajar, not to mention my english even my Bahasa is still a big mess hahaha

26stars:Aw... Prime Minister in Disguise is my favorite! But I haven't read the season 2. Anyway, salam kenal. Aku juga orang Indonesia dan masih baru di sini 😊
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26starsLv12

Sama, aku juga masih belajar. Aku baru pertama nulis di sini, sebelum2nya cuma nulis fanfic di platform lain πŸ˜‚

Sweet_SourKiwi:Thanks yah dah mampir, butuh banyak belajar, not to mention my english even my Bahasa is still a big mess hahaha
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