Sweet_SourKiwi
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Wow, I have no words to say but to say this author is a genius, the book is awesome, fully respect to author who can write novels with a system which I thought it's so hard, and this book is written so nice, really curious in what happens next! [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Oh my, I just start read this and my heart began to jump in surprise, you do have too many confusing words but I think that as a Writer's own character, it will be better by the time, and the story is great, I just read to Chp 3 but can't wait to make some comments, hahaha, keep updating Thor! it's better if you can update it routine or multiple chapters a day and consistent, keep going![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I need to take a deep breath before reading this because it has no punctuation, just simply put comma and dot, it will be nicer to read
this scene is great but lacks punctuation, don't know where to start or where to stop, just keep it up Thor!
thanks for your review, yeah I think so may repetition, need to update it, thanks